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Open Poetry #15

Living Dream

Steve B
Member

since 2000-08-07

Posts 140
Southern PA

0 posted 2001-07-15 04:46 PM

Living Dream

How the heart does beat,
When dreams come true.
How it pounds,
How it sounds,
How it drums,
How it thrums,
As it palpitates it's rhythm,
As it pulses out it's cadence.
How it thumps,
How it bumps,
How it flutters,
How it stutters,
Everytime I live the dream,
The dream that is you.

Steve B.
July 15, 2001

“The union of the mathematician with the poet,
fervor with measure, passion with correctness,
this surely is the ideal”

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-07-15 06:26 PM

A true heart's beat! Well done!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-07-15 09:02 PM

I love this beat. Very nicely done, Steve!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-07-15 09:23 PM

and the beat goes on

steady and true

especially if that special someone

thinks you're special too

[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 07-15-2001).]

Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

4 posted 2001-07-16 11:00 PM

nice effort, enjoyed.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-07-18 11:29 PM

Steve-
   Wow...this is VERY cool...
   and very WELLDONE!!
   I like it lots..

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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