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Mike
Member Elite

since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

0 posted 2001-07-15 10:21 AM

Terse,
this verse,
no time,
to rhyme,
things to do,
must bid adieu.
Oh, what the heck,
I'll take a sec,
write down a thought,
see what I've got.
No words appear,
a poet's fear,
paper's bare,
nothing's there.
No light,
no write,
my thoughts unpenned,
unglorious end.

Sigh,
bye.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2001-07-15 10:26 AM

Um... What'd ya say?

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2001-07-15 10:45 AM

Mike:

"my thoughts unpenned,
unglorious end."

impossible, my friend!

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

3 posted 2001-07-15 11:37 AM

"my thoughts unpenned,
unglorious end."

This line is really wonderful.....(as Martie pinted out) .......
An enjoyable read

Thank you
**********************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2001-07-15 11:46 AM

Mike with writer's block? Perish the thought!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2001-07-15 11:51 AM

Me too.
I'm blue.
Can't write
my plight
so I sigh
goodbye
with you instead...
back to bed!!!

?

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-07-15 07:19 PM

my stars
and bars
what's said
muse dead
surely not
it's just hot
somewhere
out there
but here
let's cheer
it's cool
don't drool
my words
in herds
and hoards
of chords
do fly
pass by
and stick
quite thick
on page
don't rage

goodness, it's hard to find the steps to get off this train!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-07-15 08:41 PM

All I can say is I enjoyed this much!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Mishtheelf
Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 68

8 posted 2001-07-16 11:32 PM

hehe I have more than one weird little skit written when I couldn't think of anything. Mine don't rhyme though. Quite creative of ya. ^_~

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

9 posted 2001-07-17 10:10 AM

what you said
what we dread
white on white
voids fill night

well done

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2001-07-17 10:15 AM

I wish my writers block had such a glorious outcome...lol.

Marilyn

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