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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-07-15 10:15 AM

We love with the same intensity
Your love is true
just like my love for you
But you've failed to follow through
you stay behind
And I can't conquer the levels of you
You are unreachable
I feel your love
distantly
Hugging you is like a dream
you are here in body
but not in mind
Although you love me
you can't comprimise.

[This message has been edited by walker (edited 07-15-2001).]

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

1 posted 2001-07-15 11:26 AM

you are here in body
but not in mind
Although you love me
you can't comprimise.
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I guess that's the heart of the matter. Close yet far.....

Thank you for an enjoyable and touching read...
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It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-07-15 12:32 PM

You've written the feeling so well. Just beyond your fingertips.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-07-16 06:53 PM

this works for a lot of reasons. . . maybe too many. . .

well done and very well thought walker. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-07-16 08:20 PM

very thought provoking piece, much to gain from it, I read it three times...

"It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty

Kathleen

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-07-16 08:22 PM

Very well written. I've known many men who are easy to hold in body, but not in mind or heart, this really made me stop and think~

Take care,
Melissa~

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2001-07-16 09:56 PM

Ohh..I can understand this. I like what you have conveyed here.

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

7 posted 2001-07-17 10:11 AM

walker,

I echo the thoughts of the replies before me. Powerful write.. it does make you think..and I have also re-read it a few times. Very well done

TaraB

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