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vlraynes
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0 posted 2001-07-15 12:58 PM




a circle
of......friendship
breaks...............tonight
an empty.......................space
remains...........................where
you once............................stood
......................................we'll
welcome......................new friends
embracing..................each one
yet none.............will ever
take your place

doreen...
you will be missed

~vlraynes



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-15-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-07-15 01:25 AM


Vicky~
Do you know how beautifully caring this is ?
Well ... I do.
What a lovely heart you have.
Yes ... we'll save her a place ...
cause she'll always be in our  's

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2001-07-15 01:34 AM


Yes...she will be missed vicky! Thank you for saying it so well!
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3 posted 2001-07-15 05:59 PM


Vicky I hope you emailed this to her?  What an very caring, and loving soul you are, and yes, she will be missed sorely as I sat in the front row, reading each and every one, but will go to the archives until she comes back  

~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~

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4 posted 2001-07-15 08:40 PM


thank you......... you're so very beautiful to write this for me...... i'm honored..... so much..... thank you
vlraynes
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5 posted 2001-07-20 11:01 AM



Marge-
   Thanks so much, my friend...  
   She will surely be missed...and, no, her  
   place in the circle will never be filled.
   Love you much!  

serenity-
   She surely will be..  
   Thank you, my friend...  

Mysteria-
   Yes...I will very much miss reading new
   posts from her, but the Archives are a
   wonderful place for remembering..  
   Thank you..  

doreen-
   Nothing less than you deserve, my friend.  
   You will be greatly missed, and I hope
   to see you back very soon..  
   Love and hugs to you...  

   ~vicky



  


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-20-2001).]

Martie
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6 posted 2001-07-20 07:34 PM


Vicky--This was written with friendship's heart...beautiful!
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7 posted 2001-07-20 08:02 PM


Tenderly painted picture of a heart felt friendship.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

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8 posted 2001-07-20 08:58 PM


A beautiful expression from the heart...yes, she will be missed. Hurry back, Doreen!
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9 posted 2001-07-20 09:11 PM



Hey Vicki? Did you know that Doreen simonizes pomes?  And me?  Yep! She does that!

C'mon and hurry up from that vacation little one! We're waiting!

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