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Midnight Ramble

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Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind


0 posted 07-14-2001 11:53 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Greeneyes

Here
Alone
Waiting, Thinking, Hoping, Wanting
Wanting for someone, you
To make me alive
My flesh is dead
Drying
Needing to live
Hours pass
Days
Weeks

My need raging inside me like a fire
You inside me,
Me Inside you,
I can feel your feelings
I want to feel your soul
I do
At Night sometimes when I am alone
Every small noise a dagger in my heart
Because it is not the soft low sounds of your pleasure
But the sound of my own heart

Sometimes I am sad

Sad that not every moment in our life is free
Sad that we were not children together
Sad that life gives us what life sometimes will
Sad that your eyes have ever cried tears
Sad that………

At once happy
Happy to know you
To know you like perhaps no one has
perhaps no one will again

Love, that’s it love,

Love is hard
We are hard
But as I sit here thinking of things,
I realize
This is love
We are hardened
But together
Soft

I sleep now
The pillows around me giant boulders
Pressing on me
Holding me down
Contrasting your soft warm soul
I feel you wherever you are
Making the rocks softer
Filling my mind… soul
Seeing you as a child

Time

Love

Sleep

History


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[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 07-14-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Lauren~ - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 07-15-2001 12:01 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

My need raging inside me like a fire
You inside me,
Me Inside you,
I can feel your feelings
I want to feel your soul
I do
At Night sometimes when I am alone
Every small noise a dagger in my heart
Because it is not the soft low sounds of your pleasure
But the sound of my own heart

Sometimes I am sad

Sad that not every moment in our life is free
Sad that we were not children together
Sad that life gives us what life sometimes will
Sad that your eyes have ever cried tears
Sad that………

At once happy
Happy to know you
To know you like perhaps no one has
perhaps no one will again
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Im feeling every beautiful, intense word of this L
Welcome back baby...welcome home...
your gentle presence has been missed..as has your lovely poetry.
heart hugs
jm

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

JLR
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2 posted 07-15-2001 12:50 AM       View Profile for JLR   Email JLR   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JLR

Very cool way you presented this...title seemed very appropriate.
Greeneyes
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3 posted 07-15-2001 01:09 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

Janet Marie~

my friend....and thank you for your responses to the words I Ramble here....


JLR~  

Indeed I tend to ramble, some times in a senseless fashion....thank you for taking time....   be well....

GE

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

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4 posted 07-15-2001 01:40 AM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

great depiction of how I minds travel in the middle of the night
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5 posted 07-15-2001 02:08 AM       View Profile for Auguste   Email Auguste   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Auguste's Home Page   View IP for Auguste

Lauren,

Do we ever real know a heart?  There's such longing, sadness and even comfort in this.  It's an interesting piece to read over and over.  I loved it, my friend.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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6 posted 07-15-2001 05:54 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

First, Lauren so good to see a post from you, and what a post!  Ramble on girl, this was excellent, and the you captured the feelings of longing to perfection.  Kudos.

~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~

Lone Wolf
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7 posted 07-15-2001 09:24 PM       View Profile for Lone Wolf   Email Lone Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lone Wolf

Oh Lauren, this one touched me deeply, hon.  Very powerful emotions you have captured perfectly.  Very well done.  *hugs*

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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8 posted 07-16-2001 06:49 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

*sigh*. . . Lauren. . . you have just said it all for me. . .

thank you. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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9 posted 07-16-2001 07:08 PM       View Profile for Rae of Sunshine   Email Rae of Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rae of Sunshine

This is beautiful!  Can feel the love and longing in your heart!  I'm new to all this, but this piece really touched my heart!
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10 posted 07-16-2001 08:04 PM       View Profile for walker   Email walker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for walker

Beautiful!
Irish Rose
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This is one to be cherished, so full of sadness and yet beauty.  Life IS hard, and yes, I wish I was a little girl again at times....

"It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty

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12 posted 07-16-2001 09:53 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress

I love this..and WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?  
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