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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-07-14 11:53 PM


Come with me to enchanted land
and forest built of golden trees
where unicorns drink peacefully
and lavender has come to seed.

Join me in journey of the heart
to magic places never known
where knights and maids stroll hand in hand
and no one ever feels alone.

Perhaps some honey will rain down
whilst bathing in an azure pool
as sweet caresses everyone
and ruby crystals glow as jewels.

A little further down the path
a group of men philosophize
and maidens sit and listen rapt
while sipping goblets filled with wine.

Come with me, let us not stay here
(such place of hate and greed and lies)
to land of mermaids and of love
where no one shall have need to cry.


© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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Arkansas
1 posted 2001-07-14 11:58 PM


You paint it so well, Sandra..leave a ticket open for me when the train leaves to Perfectland...very gentle smile
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-07-15 12:05 PM


this is wonderful..the imagery is lovely..the whole poem has a fairy tale essence to it...
Your new pic is lovely too  
well done poetess Cat
jm

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

VAS
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since 2000-11-16
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Oregon
3 posted 2001-07-15 01:58 AM


sounds like a great place

isn;t fantasy fun!

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2001-07-15 02:08 AM


Hello gorgeous! Love the new pic, Miss Sandra! love the poem..and I love your spirit too, sweet lady! HUGS to you!
MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...
5 posted 2001-07-15 02:23 PM


My parallel-self is already there...  once in a while, if I meditate and listen, I can experience that life and be inspired in this one.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21
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Michigan
6 posted 2001-07-15 02:33 PM


Beautiful place, maybe someday, oh, today, just close your eyes. We are there.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
7 posted 2001-08-14 04:05 AM



Sandra-
   Sounds like a wonderful place.
   You've painted such lovely imagery here.
   Beautifully done, my friend.

   hugs,
   ~vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
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Dark side of the Moon.
8 posted 2001-08-14 04:59 AM


I know the place well... my "Imagination Playground"... I have a well worn path to and from the gate. Unfortunately I can't stay there forever. (sigh) You paint the picture perfectly.
WRBreezin
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Posts 212

9 posted 2001-08-14 06:13 AM


Come with me, let us not stay here
(such place of hate and greed and lies)
to land of mermaids and of love
where no one shall have need to cry.


A compelling walk through a spirited dream...magic.

Willie

[This message has been edited by WRBreezin (edited 08-14-2001).]

Cpat Hair
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10 posted 2001-08-14 08:57 AM


Perhaps some honey will rain down
whilst bathing in an azure pool
as sweet caresses everyone
and ruby crystals glow as jewels.


a mid eastern turn to this phrase in some ways..and one which stood out in my mind as I read...

nicely done

vandana
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USA
11 posted 2001-08-14 10:29 AM


enjoy
Victoria
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12 posted 2001-08-14 10:44 AM


nicely written sandra..loved it hugss

                ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


shadow of the fall
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Indiana
13 posted 2001-08-14 08:48 PM


these are lovely thoughts, just lovely.
RSWells
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since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533

14 posted 2001-08-14 08:50 PM


I don't even dream of such nice places but wouldn't it be....................
Enjoyed

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

athena4
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since 2000-12-10
Posts 622

15 posted 2001-08-14 09:50 PM


Sandra,
     This is truly beautiful. What a perfect Utopia you have painted here.....
          Love, Elise

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