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Logan
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0 posted 2001-07-14 11:50 PM


Face white with fury
Moonbeams sparking for the jury.
Who will be the one that be
The catalysis for lovers to see.
Wrapped in moonglow, or sweat in the sun,
One of these doesn’t sound like fun.
Lovers gaze in moonlit night,
Or squinting in the harsh sunlight.
Oh, the moon will get its due,
And eclipse the sun before she’s through.


© Copyright 2001 Logan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-14 11:56 PM


Logan, just had to read this before I force the computer off for the night. I like this, sounds like quite a battle, but the "good guys" will win.
Sandra

Logan
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2 posted 2001-07-15 12:00 PM


Sigh, yes, and knowing Marge, I can imagine who that will be,,what is it about fools rush in...very gentle smile
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3 posted 2001-07-15 12:01 PM


What on earth..er, in heaven is going on with these moon battles? Star wars in the forum tonite? Laughing WITH you Logan!!!  
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4 posted 2001-07-15 12:23 PM


Hello, Baby !
You called ????
*giggles*
And ..... ?
Galatic glow continues~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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JLR
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5 posted 2001-07-15 12:32 PM


Absolutely...will take the moon, anyday!
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6 posted 2001-07-15 04:43 PM


  the moon for sure for sure!  Very cute poem Logan  
Hugs,
~Krista

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7 posted 2001-07-15 06:05 PM


Moonies strewn all over the place, can't wipe this smile now off my face    Cute!

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8 posted 2001-07-15 06:20 PM



now you KNOW this just had to bring the Sun in...

go ahead...eclipse away! My muse is on the other side of that moon, and she probably needs a tan!

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