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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-07-14 10:47 PM



Shades Of Jade
~*Marge Tindal*~

O'Jealous moon
shaded green ~ jaded
with reflections of another
Tinted in the glow of sunlight
across the oceans of the night
Shine your light for all to see
then as the morn comes wake
settle down slumbered deep
'neath sun rays on lake
Shades of jade~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Balladeer
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1 posted 2001-07-14 11:00 PM


we have forums for jaded poetry, yanno?  

We should have a Marge Forum! You deserve one....

vlraynes
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2 posted 2001-07-14 11:10 PM



Marge-
   Loving this one...
   I was a little worried about
   how that moon was going to handle
   sharing the attention myself..LOL.
   This is wonderful..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

Balladeer-
   LOL @ you...I second the Marge Forum!!
   I'd read EVERY post!!  

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Logan
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3 posted 2001-07-14 11:53 PM


Ahh, but the moon..well, a jealous one, she be..gentle smile
serenity blaze
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4 posted 2001-07-15 12:03 PM


Hey Margie!   and boy oh boy...have I had enough of a jade moon....sigh...applause to you m.o.m.s.!!!
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5 posted 2001-07-15 12:08 PM


LUNA LOVELY ...
thy moon muse leaves us all jaded with poetic envy
another moonbeam beauty from you.  

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-07-15 10:38 PM


This was pure inspiration FUN !

Balladeer~
Vicky~
Logan~
Serenity~
JanetMarie~

Thanks for joining me in my jaded mood of moon !
I'm a'looking for that jaded forum !
Tee-Hee !
You all are wonderful company !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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7 posted 2001-07-16 06:01 PM


Check the records, I am only green on St. Patrick's day --- usually ---
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8 posted 2001-07-16 07:30 PM



LunaTic~

Kelly green
a different shade
of moonlight caught in
serenade-of a heart in
glow of moon plays it's
way across the tune
sung of night -Ah
just right~


~*Marge~*

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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9 posted 2001-08-01 10:09 PM



How could I have missed this one?

As usual, you impress, I love shape poems, and you're making me love the moon now  

Melissa~

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10 posted 2001-08-01 10:17 PM


My goodness how did I miss it too?  What a wonderful presentation again Marge, and the extra to lunatic was also so impressive, you are for sure the "Moon Lady"!

~To see real beauty you must look with your heart~
           ~* Mysteria *~

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11 posted 2001-08-01 10:24 PM


What a wonderful ode to the jealous moon. It was enchanting. Thanks for sharing. I treasure all the poetry I find about anything out there.  
-Samia

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12 posted 2001-08-01 10:31 PM



O' yes
a Melissa moon
shining through the night
almost time for August moon
to show her rays of glorious light
Across the sky in the pure magic of
glowing moonbeams of another love
Giving off magnetism so eternally
gathering up hearts in everseem
Just the perfect serenade
for hearts in wait for
her display~


~Mysteria
The moon also has
a luminated glow for thee,
caught shining in pure ecstasy
Peeking through with afterglow
touching quiet the lovers below
Out across the midnight sky
she waltzes as the clouds
float by - Seeking in
her glowing~


~Samia
Glad to catch you
in the glow of jaded moon
in brilliant glow - shadowed
in the dark of night - peeking
out in sheer delight, to dance
across your heart this night
Catch a beam and smile
If for just a little
while~


~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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13 posted 2001-08-01 10:59 PM


Marge, do you never run out of creativity? Even your replies are more than special.
Love this, love the moon, and love you.
Sandra

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14 posted 2001-08-01 11:46 PM



~O'Moon
of Catalina I guess
I'd have to say - that
when the moon runs out
of beams - I'll still be
around to play-for in
her glow she sends
friendshine~


Thank you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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15 posted 2001-08-02 01:28 AM


oh Marge I love this one very much.....oh yeah...and I agree with Balladeer that you deserve to have a Marge Forum......

((Hugs))
Charisma

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16 posted 2001-08-02 01:46 AM



Charisma~
You fascinate me
with your ways of charm
but it should set off an alarm
to think that there would ever be,
any forum so full of jaded shades of
moony little me - so for the present
we'll set the moon to crescent and
watch with fascinated eye as she
rises 'cross the sky - waning
out and waxing in - lots
of glow to pen~


Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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17 posted 2001-08-02 05:19 PM


Marge! That was beautiful! Thanks for the surprise, I don't think your muse will ever leave you.
God bless,
Samia

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18 posted 2001-08-03 04:44 AM


Samia~
I pray you are right !
Glad you enjoyed it hon.
I enjoyed doing it for you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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19 posted 2001-08-03 06:37 AM


Marge,
You are going to have to teach me to write like this!  I love this work!
~hugs~
Cindi

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20 posted 2001-08-03 11:19 AM


    ohhh....I love your moon poems so much!  Even if I didn't love the moon so much, I'd certainly have a new appreciation for it after all your beautiful posts on it!  You are the perfect person to spread it's loveliness around to everyone else  
Hugs,
~Krista  


"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (edited 08-03-2001).]

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21 posted 2001-08-03 11:24 AM


In a
Tip of blue
A little moon just
For you for under the
Blue moon I must reside
Until the sun comes to
Beg to me “hide” and
Then I shall come
To you, for
you


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22 posted 2001-08-03 12:12 PM


Marge--

The moon lit the room last night
and I from bed saw with delight
a Margie girl at window ledge
smiling moonbeams into my head

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