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Write Right...the english language revisited
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Write Right...the english language revisited |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~Write Right~ I'm smiling now and saying, 'hi', before I blow this mood sky high my friends, now that I have you here there's something I'd like you to hear I find the english language odd and often find myself quite awed I sometimes even feel disgust after the language I've discussed It really makes no sense you see that one should see the deep blue sea or look up in the sky so blue and feel a gentle breeze that blew tricky spellings are hard to bare I'd almost rather fight a bear before he struck me with his paws I'd simply ask him, 'please', to 'pause' I WILL say, should you send me mail feel free to fed-ex me a male at very least, he'd help me haul the boxes stacked up in the hall and please inform when I'm the one it could be I've already won the english language can be fun, but sometimes it just pains my butt you ask, 'is there some rule you know?' I simply have to answer no to master english is a feat you may find, in your mouth, your feet which could, in fact, injure your heel but, not to worry, it will heal so, thanks for listening to my lesson my goal, your confusion to lessen thank you all for stopping by and, now it's time to tell you, 'bye' ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well done! Wow, the thought you put into this, I'm impressed! "It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ You are soooooooooo much FUN ! This is B R I L L I A N T ! I know you ... and I could just see you dancing through this one ! Are you SURE that Sliter, Twiter and Tambra aren't there .... ? They've been missing for 24 hours !  Have another cup of Raspberry Hot Chocolate and pen the night away ! *You little cutie you !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
English is supposed to be one of the hardest second languages to learn. You admirably show one reason why. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I got brain drain just trying to think of a clever response to this, Vicky honey, you have way too much time on your hands LOL  but we are sure glad you do take time to write these out, cute, cute, and so darn clever, that's you!  ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You're so clever and creative... very cool... like a poetic nursery rhyme to teach "homophones"..you know...like schoolhouse rock  this is a great idea and inspire well done Vicky When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
fantastic!! I really like this kind of thing. Truly enjoyed the read! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thanks. There is no time like the present to present this poem as a present. Good one. Melton |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
OH WELL, YOU SEEHOW CAN A DUMM DUTCHIE LIKE ME GET THE HANG OF IT THAN????  Titia See, forgot even to say this is splendid!!! The poem I ment of course. A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. [URL=http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace=100 ]http://communi [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 07-15-2001).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
RSWELLS, did you ever try to learn Dutch?? Oh boy, with all the GGGGGGG's and the SCHCHCHCHCHCH's ((LOL)) Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
WOW this is awesome really good job vicki |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and so many more....Brava Vicky...I enjoyed... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
teeheehee....! you did a funny.. remember when hippy meant big in the hips.. and drugs were something that cured you...  some odd language we have aye..very cute tricks..thanks for the laugh! hugs, g "sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.." -demi moore |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a phun piece to reed, awl of it |
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Snooganzmeister32 Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67Cali, USA |
That is SOOO much FUN! Its going up on my wall! how much time did you spend on it?!? @_@ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oops...looks like I've let myself get behind on this thread...sorry folks.. Irish Rose- Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed this.. Marge, my friend- LOL...you might be onto something there... I was sure I had just purchased a new box of raspberry hot chocolate, but when I went to have a cup this morning, it was no where to be found...and there was a strange brownish powder all over my countertops...LOL. I'm SOOOO glad you enjoyed this one!! Love and hugs to ya.  RSWells- Thanks so much...glad you like.. Mysteria- LOL @ 'brain drain'...you're too funny! Actually, I had soooo much fun writing this, and the fact that you enjoyed it makes it that much better.. love and hugs.. Janet Marie- Thanks much for the kind words, and for the comparison to 'schoolhouse rock' Really glad you enjoyed! VAS- Thanks so much for the enthusiastic reply! Happy you enjoyed it. Melton- LOL...LOVE your reply.. Thanks so much...glad you enjoyed! Titia- Nothin' dumb about you, my friend.. Thanks so much for the reply...glad you like. Walt- WOW...That's quite a compliment coming from you, my friend. Thanks so much! Sunshine- Yes...too many more! LOL Thanks much! Glad you enjoyed!! dg- LOL...yep..odd it is! Glad this 'funny' gave you a laugh. btw...I DO remember that little ditty of yours. LOVE IT! love and hugs and stuff like that there. Interloper- LOL..love the reply..thanks much! Snooganzmeister32- I'm honored that this has found it's way to your wall...thank you so much! Honestly...this didn't take as much time as you might expect, but it was truly FUN to write!! SO happy you enjoyed it! hugs to all, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-18-2001).] |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
This is awsome! what a way to put it into perspective...maybe? (laughing) I loved this you did a great job! Hugs Cindi |
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