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The Last Sunrise
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The Last Sunrise |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The Last Sunrise ~*Marge Tindal*~  She rose in golden glory rays ablaze across the morn Flinging light upon the meadow gossamer gown of glowing adorn Skipped across the mountains the valleys and the seas Left her crowning touch for everyone to see She kissed the bluebells into blooming Warmed the birds so they would sing Breathed a sigh 'neath butterfly to give them lift of wing Tanned the hides of kids at play in sand castles by the sea Caught a ride on current flowing then waved goodbye to me Beams reflecting prismed beauty on the ebb of tidal tears wept Out across a crimson sea she laid down her light and slept ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- I had a feeling you'd show up here before too long, my friend..  This is so beautifully written... I can feel the the warmth radiating from this.. (and not just because I'm in Phoenix!) LOL I love this sunny little piece..  "She kissed the bluebells into blooming Warmed the birds so they would sing Breathed a sigh 'neath butterfly to give them lift of wing Tanned the hides of kids at play in sand castles by the sea Caught a ride on current flowing then waved goodbye to me" Love it, love it, love it!  warm sunny hugs, Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-14-2001).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sigh, Marge, gentle one, the moon is gonna be soooo jealous now...very good write..gentle smile |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
the crowning glory of the sea..lovely Marge ~Victoria~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ You make writing SUCH FUN ! I love sharing with you. Thanks, sweetie ! Logan~ I glow for you - in shaded hue - The everseem - of jaded green~ *Hugs* Victoria~ Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
WELL DONE MAIDEN LOVE IT; HUGS WARRIOR |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
 Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Marge, You make me want to be EVERYWHERE you write. Gail |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Almost as pretty as you are. Beautiful read. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Oh......beautiful ~Marge~....... So lovely and shining......  Thank you ******************** |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
May the sun always rise upon you, Marge! This is very beautifully done, as always! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful, you can feel the sun glow on your face. Sandra |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh how beautiful Marge......love it! Charisma |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Loved it, that special sphere we call the sun. Do not fear going forward slowly, |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge, this was a treat to read, so beautiful! You paint pictures of life so well, and your poetry lights our hearts~ It's a keeper! Melissa  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Yanno, your words are like honey on me little tongue! I absolutely loved these two lines: Breathed a sigh 'neath butterfly to give them lift of wing now, how special are those? You just have a way with making words sing from that heart of yours. Loved this one, gonna buy a nice frame for it! ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Are you sure you didn't write about the Lost Sunrise? I seem to be missing me.... good job! Enjoyed the "tanning the hide" of the kids...great line! |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Miss me?  dont change marge |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge, Love when you write about the sun or the moon. This shines with beauty! Hugs, Deb |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
It is incredible how you can find new ways to describe the things that we see every day and take for granted, and you bring such freshness to each subject. God has really blessed you with a great talent to descibe his world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SoaringEagle~ You touch me gently ... I love you. Titia~ How I love to share of the beauty of 'things'. Gail~ What a lovely thing to say. Seymour~ I soooooo appreciate you. MyEnchantedMelody~ How good to have your friendship. Denise~ Missing you more than you could know. CatalinaMoon~ Thank you for the sweet thoughts. Charisma~ Don't see near enough of you, my friend. Be loved. Shadow~ It warms my soul to share with others. Melissa~ You are the warmth of friendship, honey. Mysteria~ To know the warmth of friendship, one has only to know you. Karilea~ And in the sharing, we all are splashed with the glow. Kevin~  You bet !BloomingRose~ Thanks so very much. SongBird~ I humbly appreciate your reply. All things are held in the glory of Him. *Hugs* to you all. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Marge I felt so much warmth and happiness radiating off this beautiful piece of writing. I loved every word that you created in this masterpiece. Take care...Sue Suetang |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Awesome! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
My goodness, Marge, I honestly don't know what to say. This is breathtaking. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Rae of Sunshine Junior Member
since 2001-07-15
Posts 35Valley of the Sun, Arizona |
Marge This is gorgeous!!! I love it!!! I agree with Vicky about feeling the warmth...(and wish I was in phx)...gives me a whole new attitude towards the crowning glory of the morning! Dance like nobody is watching |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Oh, I'm such a sucker for sunrises/sunsets...and combine that with a Marge poem, and, well, a beautiful thing, indeed! This is truly amazing...the imagery is spectacular! If you couldn't tell, I loved it... sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SueTang~ Thank you so much for letting me share my thoughts with you. InterLoper~ *Marge smiles* Saunni~ You said it beautifully ! Thank you. Rae~ So glad you like it. Now, that Vicky is a little ray of sunshine for sure ! SnowPants~ From one sucker to another ... I could tell ! I'm glad to know it pleased you so. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mishtheelf Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68 |
heh I'm not sure whether I'd rather watch a real sunset or read yours. Thanks for the warm welcome. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MishTheElf~ Ahhhhh, were it not for the inspiration of the real one~ I'd have no words. Thank you for a lovely comment~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marge: This is gorgeous, both in thought and presentation. I loved it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ Thank you, hon.  BettyLou~ You know I'm pleased you like it. *Psst ... my e-mail is acting up ... so I'll get back to you when I straighten it out. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
ok, couldn't resist this beauty Marge, had to read it once again....and again. So I think its much better to make a thread to this keeper. Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Sweetie, I'm so pleased that you enjoyed it that much ! ! Makes for a glorious morning ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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