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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-07-14 07:13 PM


Your love is like a symphony
Playing music to my heart
Even though there is much distance
Keeping you and I apart

The distance becomes irrelevant
As my heart calls out to you
How it overflows with joy
Whenever you come into view

My dreams bring you right beside me
In my dreams we're never apart
As I count the amount of steps it takes
To reach your kind and loving heart

The pinnacles of passion we climb
With such ease we reach its peak
How entranced am I looking into your eyes
As my knees suddenly feel so weak

Your love is surely a gift
That has been bestowed upon me
How you warm my aching heart
And set my spirit free

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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since 2001-05-28
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1 posted 2001-07-14 07:15 PM


Your love is surely a gift
That has been bestowed upon me

Sue, very gentle smile, it sounds to me, like he is pretty dadgum lucky to have your love..Best to you

vlraynes
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2 posted 2001-07-14 07:19 PM



Suetang-
   this is lovely...
   enjoyed reading it..

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



shadow974
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since 2001-06-21
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3 posted 2001-07-14 07:27 PM


Lovely poem. Being apart can be hard but the reunion, wow!!

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2001-07-14 07:28 PM


A memorable melody, Sue...

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

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5 posted 2001-07-14 07:37 PM


This is a very well done poem and I am sure that many can relate to it, especially with all the inter-action on the internet these days.  Very, very nice.

~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~

kaile
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6 posted 2001-08-06 11:54 AM


glad to know that some long-distance relationships work out. i do hope this is autobiographical
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
7 posted 2001-08-06 06:06 PM


Thank you all so very much.  I am very lucky to have many special people in my life.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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