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I Am-----challenge answered
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I Am-----challenge answered |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I am...a wanderer and a dreamer I wonder at the beauty of a dew kissed rose I hear the song of faeries at play I see unicorns on the edges of my memory I want a lovefilled life, his hand in mine I am...a wanderer and a dreamer. I pretend theres always a tomorrow I feel the rainbows colours showering over me I touch dragons wings, soft as newborn child I worry about the world my kids are growing into I cry at children on the street I am...a wanderer and a dreamer I understand love should last a lifetime I say follow all your dreams I dream of a world at peace with itself I try to be the woman I believe I am I hope for a love thats forever I am...a wanderer and a dreamer... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yes...this is the you we have come to know thru your poetry and replies... beautiful write Paula... of the many challenges weve done here...this one was always my fave...as it allows us to see our fellow poets thru their own eyes and also the challenge of writing to the templates format using the phrases. I see Alicat has posted it for us again in the Poetry Challenge forum....very cool to see this one go round again  Well done poetess of the Unicorn... heres to finding those dreams jm Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Paula, this is a beaut, showing your fantasical whimsy and romantic soul at it's best, and most poignant. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Well done! It's good to see another one of these. I'd kind of forgotten about the challenge. You've done a poignant piece here. |
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pure_innocence Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 80Colorado, US |
I too pride myself as a dreamer. Though I have never been capable of putting so beautifully into words. Your message is one I relate to, one that I wish more would listen to, if not learn from. Much apprciated, thanks for sharing. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I remember this challenge well. I sure enjoyed reading who you are! You are a dreamer just like me. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
you left out one heck of a good poet...and a warm, caring human being...but we all know that, anyway ...and let's not forget...  [This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 07-14-2001).] |
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