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Words of love |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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I’ll walk with you my dear today and every other day We may fall at times and cry, but let it come what may I’ll take your hand in mine my dear, for warmth it gives my heart I’ll sleep beside you now my love, lest none tear us apart With you the roads seem smoother now, our shelter now a home And days they seem much brighter now, that I am not alone You’ve given me the smile I lost, of which I thought had gone My heart the strength to love again, and once again belong You’ve shared with me your inner self, the core of who you are You’ve shown me what a day can bring and sunsets from afar You’ve given me foundations to build on and expand A life of hopes and many dreams and somewhere sweet to land I thank you; change not who you are, forever or a day Be my beacon shining bright to guide me on my way Be my love, my wanting, my friend and all I need Be the green grass always sweet, on which I always feed |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a lovely write, but please do remember, people change...and we have to grow with it... oftentimes, you might end up in glow with it.... well done Rick...you left another smile... |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I loved it...thanks Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
filled with hope, promise and tenderness |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Sunshine. Thank your Sunshine for your thoughts and reply, this was written for two friends about to get married again, a second chance. Cindi. Thanks for the reply, nice to get your comments. VAS Thanks for your reply and kind words. Rick |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"With you the roads seem smoother now, our shelter now a home And days they seem much brighter now, that I am not alone You’ve given me the smile I lost, of which I thought had gone My heart the strength to love again, and once again belong" Beautiful cadence and rhyme Rick, and such heart-warming sentiments. This was just lovely, very much enjoyed your thoughts in this.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Kit, thank you for your lovely comments, they are very much appreciated, the enjoyment in poetry is the sharing. Rick |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rick~ What a lovely, loving, caring, sharing piece. Very much enjoyed your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Marge. Loved your comments, thanks for giving my work a read. Love of peotry is for love of life. Rick |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Rick this is a most special love poem. Sandra |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Compassionate and loving -- two very good qualities to express to others. Nicely written, Rick. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Thank you Sandra for your special words and also the ones from you Mark, they mean the world to me. A poem is nothing unless shared and fulfilment never gained unless the work with life compared. Thank you both. Rick |
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