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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-07-14 07:16 AM



purple slugs
go down easy
with a shot of
light pink salt
and you can
sell most anything
With money and
a Carol Alt--
cut-out standing
near the door-
if she could talk
she'd ask for more...
she would smile
most winningly
and get your toothpaste
sold for free
(What has this
to do with me?)
What does this mean..
if...anything?
A slug in snail--
purple entrails-
go down easy
foam in salt...


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-07-14 08:34 AM



...and your inspiration for this was?...[but you left a trail of smiles behind....]

brian madden
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2 posted 2001-07-14 10:14 AM


I perfer whiskey, but that is me. quite surreal and I am sure whether this is a serving suggestion or whether I should be reading between the lines. NOw I am the one who is afraid of you. I should start our duet soon, but my muse and I are having a sulking match and she is winning.  

"Here I am in prison,here I am with a ball and chain There is whiskey in the jar-o" Traditional irish song.

VAS
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3 posted 2001-07-14 10:40 AM


come on over to my house, I have more than ever this year and they're 20 times bigger than they usually are...they're not purple, but HAVE YOU BEEN FEEDIN' EM????


slimey, sserenity, ssslimey

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4 posted 2001-07-14 11:02 AM


Carol Alt???    

I always thought that an Ali Landry cut-out worked better. . . lol

I love this. . . just what my demented mind needed today. . .

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5 posted 2001-07-14 11:07 AM


you went into the city again didnt ya  
French quarter getting too commercial?
its the damn tourists ... they come looking for rhyme water  LOL
Dont know what ya had but I want some of it if the snails leave purple trails Rofl

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

Logan
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6 posted 2001-07-14 11:16 AM


next time the gawkers want raw oysters, tell them those are Mississippi oysters..gentle smile
serenity blaze
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7 posted 2001-07-14 11:56 AM


Quick thanks...and Jan? you got it immediately of course...smiles and high fives...love ya lady! and thanks to all...
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8 posted 2001-07-14 04:57 PM


Anyone ever tell you that you a very funny?  Well you are, I have yet to go there, but I will next year, and you can show me those trails, and those darn slugs, how's that?  Girl, you slay me!

He ain't purple, but he's my brother! (that's a song I think, and hmmm, then there is Doug and the Slugs, and tourist slugs too.

~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~

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