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Not That Long Ago

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 07-14-2001 06:58 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Not That Long Ago

One day
not that long ago
I met a pretty girl
I wished I could get to know.
I found nothing
so special about her
that really caught my eye.
She was an average girl
and I was an average guy.
I spent lots of time with her.
We spent all our Sundays together.
We shared feelings from our hearts
and we shared lovely moments of pleasure.
She was not a princess and I was not a prince
still after a while I found her smile
to be something I couldn't resist.
Although I know a man gets not his every wish
was I surprised when I found she had
the sweetest lips I ever kissed.

Jameslee@June14,2001
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Kit McCallum
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1 posted 07-14-2001 07:32 AM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

"She was not a princess and I was not a prince
still after a while I found her smile
to be something I couldn't resist."

Ah James ... no prince or princess titles required ... just a lovely smile to beguile. I enjoyed this.  

Best wishes,
/Kit
cpalmer
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2 posted 07-14-2001 08:09 AM       View Profile for cpalmer   Email cpalmer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cpalmer

"the sweetest lips I ever kissed"

Wonderful! the joy of the first kiss...I love this one! Thanks for sharing
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

VAS
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3 posted 07-14-2001 10:52 AM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

something drew you to her, someday, maybe you will discover what it was

I just thought of a line of a song

"something in the way she moves"

Maybe for you it's "something in the way she moves me"  

enjoyed your poem
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4 posted 07-14-2001 11:01 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Ah, JamesMichael~
You always write the *kiss* with such delicious flavor !
~*Marge*~

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Very beautiful and sweet, well done.
JamesMichael
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Thank you Kit, Cindi, Vas, Marge and walker for the wonderful responses...James
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I believe that lovers become more beautiful to each other within the power of love...James
 
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