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Open Poetry #15

The two faced coin

The meek
Junior Member

since 2001-06-22

Posts 16
Australia

0 posted 2001-07-14 05:40 AM

Your name floats by,
A feather in the breeze,
My heart, thundering,
A smile to seize,

A two faced coin,
Forever looking away,
Our forbidden love,
Sets my deep disarray,

A kiss in the dark,
Powerful and bright,
The two sides merge,
Together one night,

The rise of the sun,
A balloon above ground,
Destroys our love,
The coin is again round,

A tear of pain,
As our love is divided,
I can see you no more,
My happiness, subsided,

Can a fobidden love
Ever come free?
Or is my love trapped forever,
Looking away from me.

We must read the lines before we read between the lines.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-07-14 08:13 AM

An interesting read, on the flip of a coin... thank you, Meek...

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

2 posted 2001-07-14 08:33 AM

I really like the use of a coin in this one...sometime forbidden love is like a coin always turned the wrong way...thank you for this.
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-07-14 10:19 AM

therefore, forbidden

interesting piece

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

4 posted 2001-07-14 07:47 PM

I like this one allot!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-07-14 08:46 PM

forbidden love...ah, there's a poem there waiting to be written and you just did!

"It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty

Kathleen

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