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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
desert ratting yuccas point to flowering recall dry air filling recesses, while this mind, sand grit barren, still carries blood red sunrises swiftly dispersing to royal sets of purpling gold needing to remember that scorpion and tarantula seek the dark and to remain wary of where to place my boots my muse is having fun with my head, today....Thank You, Muse.... [This message has been edited by Decaflame (edited 07-13-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I do think your muse is wonderful tickling your mind this way......  |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
enjoyed your desert sunrise....... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Well tell your muse to be careful... we don't want your head all rattled and shook up.. if Muse is going to play..must play nicely..  Enjoyed the poem!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DecaFlame~ 'while this mind, sand grit barren, still carries blood red sunrises swiftly dispersing to royal sets of purpling gold' Me thinks me likes this little muse !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
enjoyed, this, and the heat here in my room coupled with it makes me hear the clicking sounds of the desert...some kind of flying creatures and almost sounds like it's sizzling in the heat. does anyone know what creature is making that sound? or is it maybe the sound of rattles in the distance......ooooooh, I'm spooking myself, but, Deca, YOU started it! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
You make the desert beautiful, very nicely done. PM |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Decaflame, looks like both of you are having fun! if this is your muse acting up then I want to swap muses with you. Enjoyed this poem. "Here I am in prison,here I am with a ball and chain There is whiskey in the jar-o" Traditional irish song. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, the desert, the ocean,,they all have that loneliness about them, which appeals to me greatly..loved this write..gentle smile |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
It's not so much where you place your boots as whether or not you remember to check them before putting them on in the morning. Smiles. PS B+. [This message has been edited by RMW (edited 07-13-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ha, this has a cute ending. Confession-I do NOT like the desert. Hot, buggy, and no comforts of home. But you described it well. Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Your muse has painted a stunning picture this evening, Decaflame. Nice write! All writing comes |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Eeek! Great imagery, but to a little mountain gal, that sounds dangerous with those yucky spiders. ~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~ |
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