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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-07-13 12:22 PM


Red Rock rims
Stuttered with gnarled
And ancient green
Rise quickly,
Unlike the sun.

Jagged cut ravine
Winds willy nilly
Across desert floor
Waiting for rains
Which seldom come

And in its depths
A sidewinder
S tracks away
From my shadow

As dust bathed boots
Scarred and soft
Leave little behind
To note passage
Unexpected

Trekking through
Desert hearts can
Leave you burned
And thirsty…

So I drink
From your well
Before I travel on.


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Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-07-13 12:24 PM



Ah...you found oasis....

VAS
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2 posted 2001-07-13 12:45 PM


Oh, my Cpat, very vivid, I need to go grab my bottle of water, I'll be back to the forum in a bit.
SEA
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3 posted 2001-07-13 01:27 PM


captivating....makes me want to offer you a drink.......
MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2001-07-13 01:42 PM


Kind of like the journey through life...  Thank God for those wells along the way to make our journey a little bit more tolerable...  A picturesque write, Ron.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2001-07-13 01:52 PM


Deca: one must always look for oasis

VAS.. get your drink and get back here!! ( chuckling)

SEA.. as long as your well is not as salty as your name..I would drink from it anytime...

Mark.. yes it is.. just like it and yes thank goodness for the occaisional well to stop by..

Thanks Everyone!!!

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