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A Sequenced Symphony
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A Sequenced Symphony |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A Sequenced Symphony You say you really know me inside and on out. Your thoughts take slow walks over me, with you there is no doubt. Chapter after chapter line by conscious line. I am an open book to view. You've touched my edges, fine. You've read me in the summer heat, when storms have raged on end. Responded, watching silently, devoted loving friend. You've turned the page to watch the leaves upon my trees limbs Fall. I lingered in the cool each night to hear your shadows call. The pages of my Winter's write are filled with loving you. Your double kiss, I've missed, the melt of snow filled memories, too. And when the Springtime rains came down, it's tears you brushed away. You are my world of seasons, bound, between my covers stay. My morning wakes, alone in you with precious words to chain. I listen for the feel of chimes in tunes of each refrain. Embraced, am I, each time I rise just knowing that you've read my words, awaiting eyes of blue to view each line, type bled. Today I let the memories wash over me in rhyme. I hold onto each seasons wake releasing you in time. A melody of thoughts, in longing novel you to me. I'm bound in words, a vision's touch a sequenced symphony. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 07-13-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Well now... this is exceptional both for the message and the way it is presented. Sounds like you are lucky to have such a person in your life... AHhhhhhh.... the way this makes me feel... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
wonderful orchestration here with the loveliest of messages vundebar, nakd!!!vundebar! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful beauty!  I love this! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Now you're talking "my domain" -- "sequenced" and "symphony"... :-) I enjoyed the flow and rhyme here, and the message leaves me pondering... many things to contemplate. Nice work, Wynter. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wynter~ What a lovely symphony of verse~ I really enjoy the softness of your writes. Gentle sounds~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I-Allegro II-Andante III-Trio con brio IV-Allegro  just couldn't resist Wynter. . . I love this one. . . it moves very well. . .-------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Wynter, you flowed like the gentle softness of a sunkissed stream..how very wonderful...gentle smile |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wynter - you my dear, may write like this any ole time you like. It's just lovely, touching, and romantic, as only you can write... I love it... BC |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
BRAVO!!!!!! Ok, Maureen, you've been holding out on us, this is fantastic verse! God, I just read it and it flowed, more more!!! I'm serious, this is verse you can really sink your poetic teeth into   keep it coming, more flow, more meter, it's great. Can you tell I liked it? "It's easier to kill love than to nurture it" Fred Hardesty Kathleen [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 07-14-2001).] |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I agree, Wynter..you handled this subject like a fine craftsman...very well presented |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Cpat very lucky ~soft smiles and thank you ~Wynter VAS I woke up to the music, Thank you for your sweet response.*s Temptress I am glad you enjoyed my words this day MARK and what did my words leave you pondering...you always have splendid replies..I thank you for that. thanks Marge, and I always enjoy the time you take to respond huggsssssssssss M Sven you made me smile with your response.Thank you, I have been kind of worn out from this 4 week flu or whatever it is now and hope to be responding soon to all the past poems I missed. Logan "a sunkissed stream" I may borrow that line from you *S Bill Charles thank you dear one..I am sorry I never got back on line..to respond to your lovely poems and I promise I am trying to do so huggsss ~Wynter Kathleen not holding out, just very tired lately You are greatly appreciated. *s hugsss M Balladeer and last but not least I thank you on this day ~softly smiling Maureen "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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