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SEA

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Member Seraphic

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with you

0 posted 2001-07-13 10:30 AM

let the music play
let the rhythm flow
let the beat bump....
let yourself go
dance....
give it a shake
come on let's play
whatcha got?
shake it this way......
sweat.....
out on the dance floor
I want to see you move
feel the music
baby let's groove.....
jam....
the night is young
this music ~ tight
come on baby
dance with me tonight.......

~SEA~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-07-13 10:33 AM

(laughing) You know I don't dance....

Wonderful poem SEA.. the flow takes the reader into the music which is behind it...

hmmm... more a dance I understand here perhaps..

Clap slap
Feet fall
In rhythm
Old words
Chanted
Meaning
Long gone
Paint placed
Face first
In patterns of
Great guile
Stalking silently
Hidden
Meanings

Sweat dropped

Memory
Remains

SEA

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with you

2 posted 2001-07-13 10:42 AM

Oh I bet you could shake it pretty good if you really wanted to

thanks

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-07-13 10:57 AM

great rhythm, you've got the groove, Baby!

you're rockin'

I've been an armchair dancer, now
for 18 years, save one dance with my daughter
at her wedding

now she dances for exercise
I hate exercise

heh heh heh

but I loved this dance with you, SEA!

SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20

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where the sky and horizon meet

4 posted 2001-07-13 12:11 PM

hehe

what a fun poem!

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

5 posted 2001-07-13 01:01 PM

Hi SEA, I'm not a dancer eather but if any poem can get me of the wall and out on the floor this one could. Great write!!!

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

Marge Tindal

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6 posted 2001-07-13 01:12 PM

SEA~
Shake that little booty, gal !
You tickle me !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-07-13 02:03 PM

I can always tell when its Friday...
Sea-girlie is shaking her poetic booty LOL
boogie-on baby

bet I can guess what music is playing

later-bumpandgrind-gator

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

SEA

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with you

8 posted 2001-07-13 02:10 PM

VAS~ thank you

SmittenKitten~ thanks

Shadow~ well, come on then......dance

Marge~ I love to shake my groove thing

glad to tickle....

Janet~ oh yeah! It's soooooo Friday.....

and the music is loud!! ( have you heard 112~ Peaches and Cream? if not listen...it's fantastic!!! )

boogie on baby!

~SEA

Lighthousebob
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California

9 posted 2001-07-13 02:19 PM

Upbeat, humerous, and visually charming..... I enjoyed watching you two carry on. A most delightful poem. -Bob

Auguste

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By the sea

10 posted 2001-07-13 03:41 PM

I love "fun" poems and this one is certainly that.

It's Friday, dance the night away.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2001-07-14 03:07 AM

I believe you will get your desire...James

bslicker

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state of mind

12 posted 2001-07-14 11:05 AM

pencil me in on your dance card.
great up-lift write Sea, and i do like to dance. It's the next morning headache... Oh that don't have nothing to do with dancing, that had something to do with what you drank.

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Rick
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Victoria, Australia

13 posted 2001-07-14 11:11 AM

SEA

In the mood tonight, to dance and dance away
Till the hours beacon and night it turns to day.

Enjoyed your read, hope you enjoyed the dance.

Rick

Qumar Fatthi
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since 2001-05-20

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Pakistan

14 posted 2001-07-15 11:39 PM

Nice Poem....................
But
Sea!
i don't know how to dance........
Believe me .................i cann't do......

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

15 posted 2001-07-16 12:40 PM

You sure do have the moves SEA. Thanks foor the dance!

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

16 posted 2001-07-16 09:46 AM

This is a fun Poem....
I love to dance

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

[This message has been edited by Zinsser (edited 07-16-2001).]

Saunni
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West Virginia

17 posted 2001-07-16 01:00 PM

Oh,loved this

I love to dance. Nice write here.

Sauni

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Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

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Deep in the heart

18 posted 2001-07-16 05:56 PM

I almost misssed this

but I didn't

Got my toe tappin' there, gal

thecraig
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19 posted 2001-07-17 04:18 PM

Picked up & carried with thrill, happily read.

catalinamoon

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The Shores of Alone

20 posted 2001-07-17 06:51 PM

Dancing in my chair..Ah I wish I had someone to go out dancing with, I love to dance..Its almost as good as..well, you know..
Sandra

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21 posted 2001-07-17 11:03 PM

I'll meet you at the club closest to halfway SEA... It'll be fun!! ;D Nice poem, too

lol

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22 posted 2001-07-17 11:07 PM

the night is young....the music tight..

two of my favorite adjectives, SEA

nicely done

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

23 posted 2001-07-17 11:20 PM

Wonderfully written, full of feeling and of course, rhythm! Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Angel
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Pennsylvania

24 posted 2001-07-17 11:31 PM

This was such a fun poem. I love to dance..even though I have no rhythm. This was really fun.

~Susie

~*~Born to Blossom and Bloom to Perish~*~

dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida

25 posted 2001-07-18 01:32 PM

hey SEA! you and prince jammin without me?? lol

this is a cute one..keep groovin!

hugs, g

"sometimes when youre hurrying too much to see whats for tomorrow, you miss whats for today.." -demi moore

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Member Rara Avis

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Deep in the heart

26 posted 2001-07-18 01:47 PM

OKAY, second time around and still gr8!

dance the night away
look forward to early morn
anticipation

vandana

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27 posted 2001-07-18 05:12 PM

let's dance!!!!!!!

,sea,one of your best poem i've read

SEA

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Member Seraphic

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with you

28 posted 2001-07-19 09:08 AM

thank you all very much

music is always on at my house......one of us is usually groovin

and nine times out of ten it's Prince groovin us along.....I do listen to other music, I just prefer his LOL

thank you again

"Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt."
-- Dorothy Parker, on herself

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