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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-07-13 10:16 AM

Come, let me brush your hair.
In this tangled time,
between day and night,
sit beside me in fading light...
Satin strands through bristle run,
when days braids are undone.
A tortoise comb and soft boar brush,
caress with love, there is no rush.
Share with me this tangled time,
come...
let me brush your hair.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-07-13 10:25 AM

send me a map, I'll be there!!!

I've not had my hair brushed by another since I was in my teens, me thinks, 'cept for the quick job of the hair dresser. And oh how I love it...and this poem. Wonderful, Cpat!!!

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

2 posted 2001-07-13 10:25 AM

Right now, Sir, you have me wishing for the long hair of youth...

and recalling the feel of mother's hands, braiding....

a welcome read...

an even more welcome feel.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-07-13 11:03 AM

you knew I'd love this

and of course, I do

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

4 posted 2001-07-13 12:31 PM

what a lovely poem

I love having my hair brushed or stroked.
~Krista

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2001-07-13 01:51 PM

RHYME??? :-] A soft image here, Ron -- nicely done.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear; few can listen."

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

6 posted 2001-07-13 02:10 PM

A true portrait of tenderness displayed through your words. hush..... between you and me, I'd much rather go to the beautician than the barber. -Bob

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

7 posted 2001-07-13 03:22 PM

i got nappy curls so be my guest. hehhehe nice one

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-07-13 10:13 PM

Sweet words of love, for this is such a tander act.
Lovely
Sandra

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-07-13 10:15 PM

Who could refuse such a sensual offer? Very nice write!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2001-07-14 01:15 AM

CPatHair~
I greatly enjoyed the stroke of this~
Brought soft memories to the forefront~
Thank you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

11 posted 2001-07-14 01:50 AM

MMMMMMMM ok

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

12 posted 2001-07-14 04:58 AM

so lovely I love this

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

13 posted 2001-07-14 08:31 AM

Oh Cpat! This is lovely! I love the play on words! perfect me dear!
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

14 posted 2001-07-18 02:09 PM

A perfect blend of gift, and give....

well done!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

15 posted 2001-07-18 02:12 PM

Cpat--The small pleasures of love are the sweetest. This is such a tender poem.

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