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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-07-13 09:16 AM


I sat one day
and listened to
the passing time
as it whispered
from stone to tree
the secrets of all
that man searched for...

answered by the sky
and the sound of passing sun
it told tales wrapped
in simplistic tailings
of comets which
confused the earth
with love...
and man...
with himself.


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SEA
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1 posted 2001-07-13 09:24 AM


"answered by the sky
and the sound of passing sun"

that sounds so cool........
another great one  

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2 posted 2001-07-13 09:28 AM



...comets which
confused the earth...

your mind is amazing....

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2001-07-13 09:28 AM


SEA: Thank YOU Again!
Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2001-07-13 09:29 AM


DECA: Thank YOU! It is amazing that anything comes from my mind...there is so little of it..
VAS
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5 posted 2001-07-13 10:32 AM


greeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaat listening, Cpat, enjoyed this a lot!!!
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6 posted 2001-07-13 10:34 AM


Thank you VAS... glad you enjoyed!!
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