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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-07-13 09:04 AM


Amor, she says, is all she needs
but scarcely can she find the source
till walking through the park one day
she strays a little bit off course.

An aged man of wisdom waits
a scroll of parchment in his grasp
as she goes by he offers her
says what you crave is found at last.

Within this scroll the potent spell
the formula for love of souls
approach with care, admonished he
for herein lies much more than gold.

From gentle eyes fall salty tears
as she thanks him with voice of awe
and hurries home to start her task
with faithfulness in what she saw.

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 07-13-2001).]

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-07-13 09:08 AM


sounds like the beginning of quite a tale....and well told at that...

I enjoyed!!

athena4
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2 posted 2001-07-13 09:30 AM


Sandra,
      Oh, if only......  Beautiful!
             Love, Elise

VAS
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3 posted 2001-07-13 10:39 AM


fascinating, agree with Cpat!
MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2001-07-13 01:39 PM


Beguiling...  intriguing...  provoking...  different...

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

Lighthousebob
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5 posted 2001-07-13 02:31 PM


A vision with lasting effects I am sure
left me here waiting with anticipation...

...(wink) watch out for those little old men hidden in the park. -Bob

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-07-13 04:06 PM


Hope this is not Love Potion # 9...very dangerous....James
Victoria
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7 posted 2001-07-13 09:51 PM


I will have to whip a love potion up one of these days or nights...and freeze it just in case haa....

                    ~Victoria~

Sunnyone
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8 posted 2001-07-14 09:04 AM


Ahh...and so it begins...the magic is passed on, and the answers sought all lie within the scroll. Am looking forward to Part II, very much!! Love this!!  

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


Sven
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9 posted 2001-07-14 11:06 AM


let the tale begin. . .

I know that you will tell it in your own wonderful style. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Logan
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10 posted 2001-07-14 11:21 AM


How very soul inspiring beginning, love the way this is heading..well done, Sandra..very gentle smile
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11 posted 2002-01-19 05:24 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, mmmmmmm...sounds like the beginning of a beautiful romance! (smiles) May you find the most beautiful love soon and share eternal happiness with him always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shin eupon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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