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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-07-13 05:27 AM


I WanT tO LoVe yOU

Michelle I think I'm starting to love you the way that you love me.
I think a part of love is accepting me for who I am and I'm trying to accept who you are and where our relationship stands.
Your not exactly what I want nor am I your ideal man.
Still I must possesss some traits that you admire or we don't stand a chance.
I don't want to hurt you and I don't want you to hurt me.
So inorder to promote our friendship and to ensure sweet harmony let's just say I want to love you and I want you to love me.
The way I see it that's not a bad place to be.
Admiring and desiring you comes easily to me.

Jameslee@July12,2001


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Victoria
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1 posted 2001-07-13 08:07 AM


i like what you said james..always nice to admire the one you love in more ways than one

              ~Victoria~

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2 posted 2001-07-13 08:38 AM


I too like what is said here... nicely said indeed!
Nate Dogg
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3 posted 2001-07-13 09:14 AM


Well done James!!

Nathan

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4 posted 2001-07-13 09:21 AM


James,
gentle wanting here....
I liked this  

pooh
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5 posted 2001-07-13 09:52 AM


how true is it   to love someone for what they are.  really enjoyed your love poem-letter.
Thank You ) Pooh

VAS
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6 posted 2001-07-13 11:24 AM


that last line is the clencher!
MARK V SHELDON
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7 posted 2001-07-13 12:05 PM


You've got, what I feel, are the two most important ingredients working for you here:  Honesty and Communication.  With these two together, you've got a very good thing going for you.  Good read, and good luck.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

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8 posted 2001-07-13 10:11 PM


Go for it James. How could she resist such sweet honesty.
Sandra

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9 posted 2001-07-13 10:12 PM


Touching plea shining from within your heart here, James.  I hope she agrees.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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