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Marge Tindal
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Dance Beyond The Moon

~*Marge Tindal*~

Always together ~ never apart
Memories cascade in the masquerade
of tears across barren plains of the heart
Forever in remembrance ~ the spirit now soars
beyond the blue horizon ~ to the land of evermore
Soaring on the spirit of forever ~ dancing past the moon
Coming to rest in a friends heart ~ in the sing-song of a tune
Gentle breezes blowing, through an open window of my mind
Ruffling the pages of memories you left behind
Sung in soft recall ~ of all you were to me
Dance beyond the moon in splendid gaiety

I can bear your leaving ~ knowing you will return
Always together ~ never apart


To comfort a friend~
So long for now, Jenna~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 07-13-2001 03:39 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Bless you Marge, bless you.  This was beautiful and will be carried in my heart forever and ever, now I can't see to write what is in my heart right now, thank you.

If you have a choice to sit down or dance, dance!

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2 posted 07-13-2001 08:48 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

very nicely said... wonderful words Marge
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Oh Marge what a tender heart you have ~ from beginning to end it is so gently comforting.  Bonnie
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Marge--Is it any wonder that I love you?  
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Wow!! Marge thiis is beautiful and so true of the closeness some share. The music is a nice touch. A nice soft touch.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

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What Marge does...stems from her soul.  Well done, my dear...
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7 posted 07-13-2001 01:33 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

"Soaring on the spirit of forever ~ dancing past the moon
Coming to rest in a friends heart ~ in the sing-song of a tune
Gentle breezes blowing, through an open window of my mind
Ruffling the pages of memories you left behind
Sung in soft recall ~ of all you were to me
Dance beyond the moon in splendid gaiety"

thank goodnes I haven't put makeup on yet....this made me cry like a baby.....you know which notes to hit when you sing the song of my heart dear Marge.....thank you for this keeper  

"Four be the things I'd been better without: Love, curiosity, freckles and doubt."
-- Dorothy Parker, on herself

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Marge, my friend-
   Your heart is showing..
   This is absolutely beautiful, and
   just another sign of what a wonderful
   and loving friend you are.  

   love and hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


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Very nice.  This poem went right past my mind and went straight to my heart speaking volumes to my spirit about true friendship.  Thank you.  -Bob
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Marge,
What can I say after what has been said?
Love ya Sy
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Sigh, I think I need to just tend my fires, for I will never even come close to how wonderfully you write and express your feelings in a flow that cascade down from the mountain of life...so very well done, guardian sister..very tender gentle smile
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Marge, a beautiful tribute~

Melissa~
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I do appreciate the comments from each of you~

This one came from deep within my heart
to comfort the heart of another~
Effortless on my part ... as I had a special spirit bring it to me~

Mysteria~
I love you~
Remember, she now soars the spirit of Jannea ...
she will return~

Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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God It is good to read your words again....   I know how this feels, love and HUGS Marge... ...


Greeneyes~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."



[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 07-13-2001).]

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Marge~

It's never easy to let them go, but some times we must.  She will return in time.  Wonderfully penned farewell.  


LW

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by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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oh, Marge...
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Marge,
I am sure she will be comforted by this one...brought tears to my eyes!  Thanks
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
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GreenEyes~
I am so pleased to see you back among friends.
Thank you for catching this one.

LoneWolf~
Return she will ... again~

Balladeer~
I love you, my friend~

Cindi~
Tears of sweet remembrance return on the dancing spirits~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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O me O my, sweetie this is sooooooooooooo beautiful the expression and the presentation is totally captivating ...

HugsNsmiles2UdearPoetFriend
*~coco~*
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I sit here in admiration and awe ...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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CoCoBaci~
Thanks so much for coming in, sweet friend.

InterLoper~
How I enjoy your thoughts and humbly appreciate them.
Sometimes the heart just speaks a piece to comfort another ...
that's just what this was intended to do.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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Beautiful Marge...you definitely know how to treasure a friend and show them how much you care.  You are an amazing comforter!  
Hugs,
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

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SmittenKitten~
Thank you .. I just read my heart~
Appreciate your comments very much.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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Bumping to Today's Topics page, Just 'cause my heart said I should~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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