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Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2001-07-13 01:27 AM

Do you ever ask,
Why? Why this? Why now? Why us?
Is there a reason?

Reasons for two hearts
To find each other like this
Tiny miracles.

Through nights rhythm beats
A love that was meant to be
So why ask why? Why?

Give in to the love
Let passion set us apart
From all the others

Your hands, all the touch
I need, your lips kissing me
Til the next sunrise.

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-07-13 01:31 AM

the reason is apparent..very gentle smile, the fates decreed some happiness, so run with it..

5_sweet_kisses
Junior Member

since 2001-04-20

Posts 49

2 posted 2001-07-13 01:49 AM

great poem, im having writters block, just to let everyone know, but i'm still here reading poems

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-07-13 03:38 AM

Paula~
The title almost says it all~
Beautifully done, poet.

Tiny miracles, indeed !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2001-07-13 05:09 AM

I had someone ask me this once. I still wonder about it, although I'm not supposed to. I love this, Paula!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-07-13 08:43 AM

lovely write... I enjoyed a great deal!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-07-13 09:34 AM

Well penned....I like the idea til next sunrise and then I'll like it again.....good questions and good poetry.......write on my dear poet lady!

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

7 posted 2001-07-13 09:41 AM

Paula....this touches many places, thank you....

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2001-07-13 10:43 AM

ahhh, and the next, and the next. and the next. . .

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2001-07-18 02:10 PM

Paula-
   These are really beautiful..nicely done.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-07-18 02:47 PM

Absolutely right on! "Why" is not a word used between lovers or with God.

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

11 posted 2001-07-18 03:27 PM

I enjoy your poetry. It is so full of compassion. Til The Next Sunrise and the next, and the next....

Melton

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

12 posted 2001-07-19 01:56 AM

Logan...I'm running...straight to him I hope...thanks

5_sweet_kisses...and its nice having you here reading...thank you

Marge...thats all we can hope for isnt it...the next sunrise? Thank you sweet lady...

Temptress...why arent you supposed to? Thanks sweetie...

Cpat Hair...Im glad you enjoyed it...thanks

ethome...well you can have the next...and the next...and the next....hugs sweet poet man

Decaflame...I'm glad I could touch you...thank you

VAS...exactly!!!!

vlraynes...thanks Vicky I'm glad you liked them

Interloper...no it shouldnt be at all huh?

2dalimit...you are so sweet to say so...thank you

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

13 posted 2001-07-20 03:46 AM

Beautiful! Simply beautiful!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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