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Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-07-12 11:33 PM

Calling

If you find me, lead me to life
And if I refuse, hold my hand
If tears run freely from my soul
Look me in the eye honestly
And tell me you are my friend

If you fail to make me happy
It simply means you're not around
When I need you the most
I've been waiting for so long
To feel the strength of your presence
But the days are endless
And the nights eternities

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

SmittenKitten
Senior Member

since 2001-06-20

Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet

1 posted 2001-07-13 12:24 PM

We all need a friend to lean on during those rough spots in life...otherwise the days and nights do seem endless. Great poem

~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2001-07-13 12:44 PM

Smittten,
Thank you, the waiting is very painful

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-07-13 01:09 AM

the poem is well done and heart felt...it's a dilemma of many often and all now and then...but happiness can only come from deep within

keep calling, calling for your happiness to find you if you can't dig it out of the depths of your belly or your heart.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2001-07-13 05:23 AM

You know..I read this two different ways. I read it on a spiritual level and a love level. Does that make sense? I enjoyed it either way.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-07-13 08:41 AM

Very nicely done... I enjoyed!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2001-07-18 01:58 PM

Daniel-
   waiting can surely be difficult,
   but a true friend is worth waiting for.
   nice write..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

7 posted 2001-07-18 02:03 PM

We do that what we must, to know the best of all things...

well done, Daniel...

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2001-07-18 03:19 PM

heartfelt written my friend, it hit me home.

((warm hugs))
Charisma

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-07-18 03:21 PM

Yes true friends that really care about us are rare...James

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