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Sabriel.s.h.lover
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since 2001-04-16
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b.f.e. aka- Hickville

0 posted 2001-07-12 09:57 PM


Goodbye my love,
I will miss you.
You were there,
to see everything through.

But now it's time,
you had to leave.
For when they told me,
I just couldn't believe.

Has our love died?
Has it gone and faded away?
I don't think it has,
so in my heart, you will stay.

You've died and gone to heaven,
one day, so will I.
When that day comes,
Then I'll have to say goodbye.

To all my loved ones,
please don't cry.
We'll see each other again,
be strong, or at least try.

I'll be with my love again,
it's only my fate.
We'll meet again, rest ashore,
on the other side of heaven's gate!

So many books, so little time
stupidity should be painful

© Copyright 2001 Angelina - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2001-07-12 10:19 PM


This was so very sad but so beautifully written.  Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2001-07-13 12:43 PM


a day to look forward to, but don't forget to smell and taste and feel and see and hear all of life from now until then, don't forget, and bring the memories with you as you do
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2001-07-13 08:20 AM


Sad to lose someone you love and also happiness to believe they have gone to heaven...still I find the time to cry...James
Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2001-07-13 08:33 AM


Sad, but very well written..



Sabriel.s.h.lover
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since 2001-04-16
Posts 73
b.f.e. aka- Hickville
5 posted 2001-07-13 11:27 AM


thanks 4 the replies, i hoped u liked it.
~sabriel

So many books, so little time
stupidity should be painful

Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
6 posted 2001-07-15 11:24 AM


Sabriel, beautifully sad. It is so hard to be alone with just the memories, but we CAN live with the memories.  Your time will come and you will be together once again.  Won't that be a wonderful day!  ME
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
7 posted 2001-07-16 11:11 PM


Beautifully sad! I know just what you are feeling!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
8 posted 2001-07-16 11:42 PM


Wonderfully expressed poem, sabriel...great work!  I liked it a lot!

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it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

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