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Restless Shine |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 headed straight for my self-control, that sweetly enchanting stare forces a dance in the mist for the weakened knees of my restraint... smoothing over any hints of hesitation, a taste of wildfire in your tranquil caresses raises the spirit of passion in desire’s depths to a higher degree of intensity... supplying an abundance of ecstasy’s kisses, an incessant surge on the shore of supplication tends to this insatiable craving for affection with a delicate stroke of stillness... lifting me to untried heights with a breathed word, a view of the stars in your simple touch blinds my eyes from the detriment of doubt with an unspoken promise of ceaseless reverence... -kh 07/12/01 it was love that first drew me, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely beautiful, exquisitely written. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
Very beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. Nice picture too.  Jeremy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
supplying an abundance of ecstasy’s kisses, an incessant surge on the shore of supplication tends to this insatiable craving for affection with a delicate stroke of stillness... lifting me to untried heights with a breathed word, a view of the stars in your simple touch blinds my eyes from the detriment of doubt with an unspoken promise of ceaseless reverence... ============================ Remember the conversation we had about you wanting to try and write and express a certain side of your poetry .... Well...its NOT going to be much of a challenge...YOU JUST DID IT and did it like ya been doing it all along... sheeesh....nothing like being inspired I used to know... So whats next...Tree Frogs...  nevermind...  In case ya cant tell...Im impressed...and envious very cool write Kris in both imagery and express So does he have a brother...ACK>>>Nevermind I gotta enough problems  Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
your words give the sense of ebb and flow, much as the see in the pic lovely, both |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I really enjoyed this...thank you for sharing Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very nicely done... great use of language and flow... I ejoyed!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ This is written so well~ 'an unspoken promise of ceaseless reverence...' Sums it all up so completely~ Just have to throw in a 'WOW' ... !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
wooooooooo liked it alot |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Sue: thanks for stopping by! glad you liked! Jeremy: thanks...I appreciate your reply! JM: hey...thanks, my flattering friend...I guess I didn't realize it when I wrote this, did I?? um, tree frogs?? didn't we already go there?  but, thanks, girlie...to impress you is an honor...I'm glad you liked it...a brother? I won't even touch that one...hehe VAS: thanks so much...I'm happy you enjoyed this! Cindi: it was a pleasure to share...thank you for reading! cpat hair: thank you! I am glad you liked it! Marge: to get a 'wow' from you is also an honor...thank you so much! walt: wooooooooo thanks! nice to see ya! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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