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cpalmer
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0 posted 2001-07-12 06:22 PM


To Him

Morning waits
Wonders rise
Time moves on
He walks in
Time stops

A friend forever
Turns to love
Could it be?
This man I see
The man that I've
Been looking for?

Three long years of
Waiting for it
The question finally comes
"Will you marry me?"
"Oh yes I will"
The smiles are united

Seven long years of
Timeless wonders
Children and us forever
In good times and bad
He is mine
My Husband and my friend....

For my husband Kevin

Cpalmer  July 10, 2001

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2001-07-12 06:30 PM


I can't describe how refreshing it is to read of love that still exists between a married couple!  I wish you two all the best, and may your love for each other remain perpetual.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

cpalmer
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2 posted 2001-07-12 06:44 PM


Mark,
Thank you! I can tell you it's been a long road though...I do have poems of times past that I will post sometime so you can see where we've come from...Thanks for reading
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Kirksters
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3 posted 2001-07-12 06:50 PM


There is nothing better then love.  Very nice poem  
cpalmer
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4 posted 2001-07-12 06:53 PM


Kirsters
Thank you...Im so glad there are all types of love...that way there is enough for your heart to go around...lyl
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

VAS
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5 posted 2001-07-12 07:18 PM


lovely

I'm of the belief, these days, that friendship, real friendship must come first in a relationship, before love/lust, because, I think it's harder to come by in the other order.

your poem seems to reflect that belief and I hope it always shall---that your friendship will enhance and strengthen your love



snowpants
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6 posted 2001-07-12 09:39 PM


Beautiful write for your husband, cpalmer!  Just a very lovely poem!  Love it!

sp  

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

RSWells
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7 posted 2001-07-12 09:54 PM


Lucky two, would it be bad form for me to be jealous? Enjoyed.
vlraynes
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8 posted 2001-07-13 01:11 AM


Vas
Thank you, I have known him for half my life and he is my best friend...The nice thing about friendship as a foundation is you can fight and still want to make up...(laughing)
Thanks for reading!
Cindi


Snowpants
Im glad you liked it!
Cindi


RSW
Not a problem, I wont hold it against you to be jealous...I used to be jealous too!  True love comes with time...take care
Cindi

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



cpalmer
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9 posted 2001-07-13 01:14 AM


Sorry guys,
My thank you notes came in under Vlraynes...she forgot to log off my computer...sorry for the error

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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10 posted 2001-07-13 08:51 AM


very refreshing... and nicely done  I enjoyed and applaud you for making it work
pooh
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11 posted 2001-07-13 10:09 AM


thank you for the poem and the memories it brings. Reminds me of the love i have for my husband   a friend, a husband... list goes on!!

vlraynes
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12 posted 2001-07-13 02:07 PM



Oops...*hangs head in embarrassment*...
sorry about that...just keepin' you
on your toes, cindi...

btw...I love this poem too, ya know...
It's beautiful..

love ya,
me  


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-13-2001).]

cpalmer
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13 posted 2001-07-13 07:57 PM


Cpat
Thank you very much, I appreciate it! Making it work isnt always easy but very well worth it!  Hugs
Cindi


Pooh,
I am glad that I can remind you of your own love...sometimes that's all we need to appreciate something in live...the great thing about poetry!
Hugs
Cindi


Vicky, vicky, vicky!
What can I say *laughing*  Well at least it made my responses more interesting!  I guess it could have been worse....(laughing loudly)
Love ya Dear!
Cindi

Oh and I am glad you liked the poem!

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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