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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-07-12 10:36 AM


Splattered sprinkles
drips and drops
colors running
it never stops
canvas ruined
yet once again
I give up hope
still chagrined

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1 posted 2001-07-12 10:41 AM


oh, please don't give up hope...just call it modern art and turn it into millions!
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2 posted 2001-07-12 10:50 AM


There is quite a bit in what VAS says. Nicely painted. Bob
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3 posted 2001-07-12 11:09 AM



it is amazing how, even without hint of color mentioned other than the word, I see vivid blues, greens, reds....blending in streaks as they are drawn down the page....

wonder what I ate last night?

and what VAS said....

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4 posted 2001-07-12 11:28 AM


And let us not forget that saying, "beauty is in the eye of the beholder" so what seems ruined might be a masterpiece to some.  I liked this, as I applied it to life in general actually, he he, that worked for me!

If you have a choice to sit down or dance, dance!

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2001-07-12 03:49 PM


You could always try using a pen instead... ;->

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

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6 posted 2001-07-12 03:55 PM


Cpat--I cannot paint but chagrin...and I like the way you write it.  
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7 posted 2001-07-12 03:56 PM


Mark... I stick to pens..this was written as me making fun of myself trying to paint, which had been suggested by a friend... they insisted I post it...and I did.. under protest..( laughing)

Many thanks to everyone for their comments....

it truly was written to make fun of me trying to paint... which I have attempted only once or twice..and realized I had even less talent for that than I do for most things...

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (edited 07-12-2001).]

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8 posted 2001-07-12 04:50 PM


Cpat
I am right with you I stick to pens too! (laughing) This painted a very good picture....
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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