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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-07-11 09:55 PM

Dance amongst this,
the fair days of summer sun.
Dance your heart to this,
the sound of wonder from afar.
How the farthest pale light
reaches me from a beach along the shore
where I fall to the ground
seeing my face in the sky.
The lightning of sudden storm
across the Rockies as I drive
rage at my souls abundent fear
that I take in second stride.
I hear the calling of ancient songs
that echo in the canyons
where a people lived and died
leaving their history for the wind.
And yet I dance to sacred heart
one that follows me in time,
looking through my eyes at a world
of dust and rain, making us new.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-07-11 11:52 PM

I hear the calling of ancient songs
that echo in the canyons
where a people lived and died
leaving their history for the wind.
And yet I dance to sacred heart
one that follows me in time,
looking through my eyes at a world
of dust and rain, making us new.
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I love the depth of this...
the vision and wisdom found in its truths
beautiful write of your soul Michael
jm

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-07-12 12:55 PM

MichaelG~
This entire piece likes me so much !
A treasure in your travel~
Thank you for sharing.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-07-12 12:57 PM

nice...I especially like this section:

hear the calling of ancient songs
that echo in the canyons
where a people lived and died
leaving their history for the wind.
And yet I dance to sacred heart
one that follows me in time,

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2001-07-12 08:39 AM

some excellent lines in this... nicely woven together..and tied up neatly in the end.. A pleasure to read!!

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

5 posted 2001-07-12 08:34 PM

This write says so much and as always with the wisdom of your old soul which has lived many times before I am sure. You know if travel inspires you so, perhaps a trip is in order.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

6 posted 2001-07-12 10:46 PM

A very beautiful write.....written by a very beautiful poet with an amazing ability to reach all that reads him......
As Always
Jenn E

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2001-07-13 08:57 AM

Very nice.. very nice indeed!

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