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Romeo Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 43 |
Girl of my sweet dreams My precious pearl feel my heart beat saying (I love you) o baby, my soul needs your whispers my body cries to be touched by you to be blessed by your firely fingers Time has never been so generous so come and live withen my eyes or simply lie in my heart Girl of my dream Ican't stay without you I won't bear your absence beyond my sight you are the air I breathe your musk sweat, perfumes the whole world you are a cloud that rains over my dry land your twinkling eyes, kill me by their arrows baby I need you here beside me I don't wanna lose you Girl of my sweetest dreams |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Romeo, I don't know exactly where your first post was, but WELCOME to Passions! Karilea |
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Romeo Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 43 |
Hi there Sunshine it's there at the end certanily, cause poeple's topics made it that way anyway thanks 4 the welcome , Sunshine take care and have a nice day |
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Sabriel.s.h.lover Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 73b.f.e. aka- Hickville |
i loved this poem. this is the first i've read of ur's but i'm impressed. great read.  So many books, so little time |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
well, whether your real name is Romeo or just your poet's name, you certainly are one, sir! Welcome to Passions!! |
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Romeo Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 43 |
hi there Sabriel.s.h.lover I really thank u 4 what have u said about my lines and I'm honored by your 1st visit to Roemo's small world I appreaciate your complement ---------------------------- VAS thanks my friend 4 letting me now my other identity which is ( as u've mentioned)not that different from the real one thanks again 4 the warm welcome my friend |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Great expression Romeo...James |
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Romeo Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 43 |
hi there JamesMichael thanks a million my friend |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you are a romeo hehe yuh love the curves and the words of this one |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Time has never been so generous so come and live withen my eyes or simply lie in my heart Girl of my dream =========================== ~Romeo~ Such lovely passionate lines.......... I hope that time has been or will be generous with you and gives you all that you dream of........ I loved your poem and would love it more to read more of your work.... Thank you ********************* |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Being a romantic, I have to say I LOVE IT, well done! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is very romantic! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
She is a lucky woman indeed, Romeo. I hope she realizes that. Wonderful write and welcome!! All writing comes |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Juliet would've fallen out of that balcony if these were the words whispered to her  kidding... hehee...But truly, I've seen 3 of your other pieces, and I muz say, you're a romantic person! Your poems touch a lover's soul... Thank YOU very much for sharing your love with all of us... |
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