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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-07-11 05:02 PM


eternal mem’ry
thoughts fondled by soft whisper
electrifying

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-11 05:21 PM


Oh goody... another one to play off of.. I just love it when you do this.. ( laughing)

Internally lit
electrically charged
love illuminates

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2 posted 2001-07-11 05:23 PM


WOW!  now THATS good..!  

i like!

that second line..how cool is that!

hugs, g

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3 posted 2001-07-11 05:47 PM



hot live wires sparking
where is soft in all of this
oh yes in the kiss

Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 2001-07-11 06:07 PM


Lady in white -good one! hehe


Memories caress
Whispered thoughts electrify
Touch ignites live wire

OOps, I almost forgot to tell you how lovely this is
I find Haiku very difficult to write and I admire those who say so much in so few words
This one is wonderful!

LIz

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 07-11-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-07-11 06:41 PM


ooooh, whooo hooo hooo

elec-tri-fy-ing!!!




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6 posted 2001-07-11 06:56 PM


Points of contact
hot as lightening
sizzle our kisses...

Lady

Thanks for sharing on this hot day...almost makes the subject...spark

"A woman is like a tea bag, you never know how strong she is until she gets in hot water..." Eleanor Roosevelt

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7 posted 2001-07-11 07:00 PM


hey, I'm all charged up now!!  LOL  

I really like how you do these. . . you make them into little pieces of art. . . expanding the form. . .

great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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8 posted 2001-07-11 07:25 PM


Ron ~ Doancha just luv it?
great illuminant
love ignites fires of passion
not easily quenched

fallen rain ~ Wow, thanx  

Lady ~
excited sparks fly
hot sensual ignition
soft-lipped reception

Liz ~
tactile memories
whisper landmarks of body
rediscovery

VAS ~ Shocking, ain't it  

theLadypoet ~
points of contact meet
welding together the twain
sizzling passions meld

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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9 posted 2001-07-12 08:58 AM



I come back in to read replies of senryuplicity....

The electric company should come see you...no one would ever have to fear any rolling blackouts....


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10 posted 2001-07-12 09:23 AM


memeories sparking
ignighting these thoughts of you
remembering heat......

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Lady ~ Think I oughtta buy or sell stock?

SEA ~ I give up ... almost  

unharnessed passion
rekindles fond memories
desirable thoughts

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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12 posted 2001-07-12 10:57 AM


lips left impression
upon my waking senses
day starts with sizzle

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13 posted 2001-07-12 11:37 AM


However:
Memories sparking
Still wear down my weary soul
For I miss a friend.  

Well done Interloper, you do these well indeed.


If you have a choice to sit down or dance, dance!

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 07-12-2001).]

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14 posted 2001-07-12 12:14 PM


I will remember
forever the softest kiss
which sparked my whole being


Woo, this is fun!    what a wonderful topic you have started Interloper.  Look at all the people you've inspired!
~Krista

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15 posted 2001-07-12 12:23 PM



won't sit in your chair
electrifying hot seat
searing, branding minds

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 07-12-2001).]

Paula Finn
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16 posted 2001-07-12 12:26 PM


Tiny firefly sparks
Kisses that electrify
Conducting my heart

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17 posted 2001-07-26 02:56 AM


oh my this is a sweet one my PoetFriend...

thanx4sharing
*~coco~*

Tiersdin
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18 posted 2001-07-26 10:15 AM


... and I DO love electrifying.

*smiles*

~Tier

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19 posted 2001-07-26 12:44 PM


SEA ~
awake to my lips
searing kisses to give you
sensually yours

Mysteria ~
loving thoughts from friend
carry over miles to you
refreshing your soul

SK ~
remember always
how our kiss ignited love
soft sensual love

Lady ~
better to recline
acting on molten thoughts
active volcano

Paula Finn ~
firefly finds his mate
their love lighting the dark night
heart and soul entwine

Coco ~ How I enjoy your visits to my work  

Tiers ~
how much I enjoy
electrifying your mind
with my thoughts of love



Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth
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[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 07-26-2001).]

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20 posted 2001-07-27 12:20 PM


oooooooooo electrical thoughts woohoo!
Lady In White
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21 posted 2001-07-27 12:24 PM



dancing hot wires
still sparking little fires
entranced conspire

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