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Mother_Earth
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0 posted 2001-07-12 03:52 PM



NINTY  HAPPY  BIRTHDAYS


If she had known she would live this long there would have been changes

Soon to be 90 and so many family and friends have left this earthly home

So many changes it makes her wonder at what has been written on life's pages

That the past went so quickly and the future so short she feels so alone

Parents long gone, siblings only two from many still live and breathe

Her soul-mate of 60 or so years slipped away when she wasn't looking

How could he leave with first his mind then his body, her left to grieve

Their son and daughter raised to expect nothing given without working

As of today she has been given 9 Grandchildren, 24 Great's and 6 Great Great's

And the only wish for this birthday is to see and touch each and every one

So many new and beautiful lives started when these two became lifetime mates

Memories grow dim, names and faces don't fit, pictures fade, Father-time won

She has become so frail, says life isn't fair in these twilight years

Too many things she can't do, places she can't go, nothing to look forward to

So many hours alone wondering if any care, depending on others, hiding her tears

But 90 is lucky and the days can be sunny, we need a Matriarch like you

Nothing ever seems to end as we planned, so enjoy the good, leave the bad

When she tells tales of olden days gone by she may have a laugh or even look sad

But at this stage in life she earned the right to share the past and let the memories flow

We will all get together to celebrate your special day with a picnic

Many you haven't seen in at least five years so we will play catch-up

So many you will remember as scrubbed-faced little darlings who grew up too quick

We will share smiles and tears, start new memories to hold and touch

Happy birthday, dear Mother.  Please don't get ready to leave yet!

© Copyright 2001 Mother_Earth - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-07-12 03:56 PM



This is very tender...there are some good things to be said about longevity...

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2 posted 2001-07-12 04:12 PM


MotherEarth~
This is so tenderly said.
Happy Birthday to the birthday girl !
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2001-07-12 04:32 PM


Very touchingly told..and tender... Happy Birthday to you Mom!!!


cpalmer
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4 posted 2001-07-12 04:41 PM


Really enjoyed this...They have a lot of tales to tell...happy birthday to her
Cindi

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5 posted 2001-07-12 04:44 PM


yes, Happy Birthday to your mom!!

this is wonderfully and powerfully said, woven with just her sentiments in many places, I'm sure

we gathered together for my grandma's 90th birthday,  she'd out lived 3 husbands and one son, by then

a very short while later, her eldest died, then her youngest a short time after that,

having out-lived all her husbands and all her sons, no matter the grand kids and daughter's in law, she felt alone as if no one left and no reason to live

she lived to be almost 94, but it was a lot longer than she wanted

cherish all your moments and enjoy your reunion  and her birthday, God bless you all!!!

Mother_Earth
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6 posted 2001-07-12 06:22 PM


Lady In White, such nice memories for us.

Marge, thanks and will add your name to the "Happy Birthday list"

Cpat Hair, will add your name too

cpalmer(Cindi) thanks and you are added to the list!

VAS, thank you, too.  This is my mother-in-law, but the only mom I have.  Her mind is going, but we get lots of scraps of the good old days.

Lone Wolf
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7 posted 2001-07-12 09:16 PM


Tender heartfelt wishes in this gem, M_E.  9o years is much to be proud of.  A very Happy Birthday to your Mom.  I bet she is glowing after reading this!!  

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by the grace of God.
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Nate Dogg
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8 posted 2001-07-13 09:23 AM


This is a special piece ME......happy birthday, to your mom!!!

Nathan

Mother_Earth
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9 posted 2001-07-13 11:31 PM


Lone Wolf and Nate, I thank you for the Birthday wishes.  
kaile
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10 posted 2001-08-06 11:45 AM


happy belated birthday to your mum!

for a person who is turning 21 soon, i constantly wonder about longevity and mortality.

this poem has given me some ideas...

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11 posted 2001-08-06 06:47 PM


wonderful ME. . . very heartfelt and tender. . . if we all could live so long. . .

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Mark Bohannan
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12 posted 2001-08-06 07:15 PM


Very tender and sincere write from you.  I can't even imagine "90" but who wants to right now anyway.  
Titia Geertman
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13 posted 2001-08-07 08:05 PM


Happy birthday to your mom mother Earth.

My mom will be ninety too in a few weeks, she's still a busy mom, still driving her car and taking up computering lately.

Beautiful happy birthdaypoem.

Titia

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vlraynes
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14 posted 2001-08-07 08:07 PM



Mother_Earth-
   What a lovely and tender write..
   Beautifully done.

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Butterflies_dont_cry
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15 posted 2001-08-07 09:17 PM


A big thank you to all of you for bringing
this up for my mom...she is on vacation with
my children...or is that my children are on
vacation and my mom is working away from
home   I know when she returns she'll
thank you herself...btw Grandma's 90th
birthday party was wonderful...all of her
children, grand-children, great grand
children and great great grandchildren with
the exception of only two...it's a birthday
we'll all remember for her~

[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 08-07-2001).]

athena4
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16 posted 2001-08-07 10:19 PM


Mother,
    God bless her!  And God bless you for such a beautiful tribute to a woman who has experienced so much life, joys and sorrows. A truly heratfelt read!
          Elise

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17 posted 2001-08-07 10:32 PM


ME...Sounds like a wonderful birthday was had...and this poem is very special..I hope she saw it.
Sunshine
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18 posted 2001-08-07 10:41 PM


I know of one mother who is going on 93...and I am so very glad to have her here with us...

I lost mine too soon!

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19 posted 2001-08-08 02:34 AM


Sounds like a fitting and wonderful celebration to a very deserving woman.  I truly hope you gave this tribute to her.  Beautifully done ME.

~ To see real beauty you must look with your heart ~
           ~* Mysteria *~

Mother_Earth
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20 posted 2001-08-10 11:07 PM


faterider, great and have a wonderful 21st!

Sven, thanks and it was a great day

Mark B, I'm with you! 90 is so old.

Titia, this lady never drove and to me has had a pampered life.

vickey, thank you.

My Butterfly kid,  thanks!  What a surprise to find all of these responses to this poem.  And it was a great vacation right after the B-party.  What a wonderful day!

Elise, thank you

Martie, she didn't see it.  I'm afraid she wouldn't like the way I see her life.

Sunshine, I lost my mom several years ago, so my mother-in-law is all I have left.

Mysteria, thank you.

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