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The Door Remains Open

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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 07-11-2001 01:37 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Gentle Spirit

The door, it remains open
here is all you need to do,
just trust in your heart
and take that first step through.

Your unhappiness, I can see
but I can not make it change,
this choice only you can make
it's YOUR life you must re-arrange.

Remember this door, it will not close
in case you ever want to come back through,
the door to my heart will remain open
and I'll be here, always....for you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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1 posted 07-11-2001 01:43 PM       View Profile for Lady In White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady In White


Soft, sincere, soothing....all of what it intended to be....

a very pretty write, GS...
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2 posted 07-11-2001 01:48 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

GentleSpirit~

Your unhappiness, I can see
but I can not make it change,
this choice only you can make
it's YOUR life you must re-arrange.


This is such wisdom spoken.
Each one must make the change of re-arrange for themselves.

Keeping the door to your heart open is just a beautiful thing to do.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 07-11-2001 01:49 PM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

very true.. and very nicely said..

I enjoyed!!
Nate Dogg
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4 posted 07-11-2001 01:57 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Very brief and precise....very nice!!

Nathan

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5 posted 07-11-2001 02:05 PM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob

It's always a good idea to have an open door for the one that you love, especially to your heart.  Very well expressed.
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6 posted 07-11-2001 02:07 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Thank you all for the kind words today.  A heart full of love can never close the doors completly.  The door swings.......both ways.  Hugs to all.
Luv,
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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7 posted 07-11-2001 02:44 PM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

an adage that is so often said, but you have said it in a wonderfully new way which is tender and sincere
Irish Rose
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8 posted 07-11-2001 07:13 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

This should be the cry of every heart, unfortunately it isn't always this way. I loved reading the hope and sincerity in this one, thank you!

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9 posted 07-12-2001 11:30 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

VAS, thank you.  The words are meant and hopefully understood.  

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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10 posted 07-12-2001 11:31 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Rose, unfortunately you are correct.  It is not always as it should be.  The poem is as sincere as I could write it.  Thanks and hugs

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

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Lovely thoughts...James
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