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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2001-07-11 01:37 PM

The door, it remains open
here is all you need to do,
just trust in your heart
and take that first step through.

Your unhappiness, I can see
but I can not make it change,
this choice only you can make
it's YOUR life you must re-arrange.

Remember this door, it will not close
in case you ever want to come back through,
the door to my heart will remain open
and I'll be here, always....for you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-07-11 01:43 PM

Soft, sincere, soothing....all of what it intended to be....

a very pretty write, GS...

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-07-11 01:48 PM

GentleSpirit~

Your unhappiness, I can see
but I can not make it change,
this choice only you can make
it's YOUR life you must re-arrange.

This is such wisdom spoken.
Each one must make the change of re-arrange for themselves.

Keeping the door to your heart open is just a beautiful thing to do.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-07-11 01:49 PM

very true.. and very nicely said..

I enjoyed!!

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2001-07-11 01:57 PM

Very brief and precise....very nice!!

Nathan

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

5 posted 2001-07-11 02:05 PM

It's always a good idea to have an open door for the one that you love, especially to your heart. Very well expressed.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2001-07-11 02:07 PM

Thank you all for the kind words today. A heart full of love can never close the doors completly. The door swings.......both ways. Hugs to all.
Luv,
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

7 posted 2001-07-11 02:44 PM

an adage that is so often said, but you have said it in a wonderfully new way which is tender and sincere

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-07-11 07:13 PM

This should be the cry of every heart, unfortunately it isn't always this way. I loved reading the hope and sincerity in this one, thank you!

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2001-07-12 11:30 AM

VAS, thank you. The words are meant and hopefully understood.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2001-07-12 11:31 AM

Rose, unfortunately you are correct. It is not always as it should be. The poem is as sincere as I could write it. Thanks and hugs

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2004-06-13 03:12 AM

Lovely thoughts...James

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