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Do You Ever ?
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Do You Ever ? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Do you ever miss me? When Iam away, Do you ever think of me? When Iam gone away, Do you ever realize How long It has been Since I met you , Do you ever miss me? Do you ever say my name at night? When Iam not there to hold you tight? Do you ever listen to my songs? When you miss me that much Do you ever think of me? Do you ever try to say the words you want to? Do you ever? Do you ever cry? When you miss me? Do you ever sing my songs when Iam not around, and whisper my name, say that you really miss me, Do you ever think realize It was your mistake to let me go, Do you ever miss? And sing those words again.... |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
...and sing those words again... a song, indeed.... |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
Very nice. Poems mean so much more when you can relate to them. Thanks for sharing  God Bless, Jeremy |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
well said...we humans often struggle I think wondering if we really matter/mattered to someone after/during the time we know them |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Do you ever miss? And sing those words again Nicely ended... and filled with questions I think most of us have asked at one time or another... I enjoyed!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ 'Do you ever say my name at night? When I am not there to hold you tight? Do you ever listen to my songs? When you miss me that much' Your words are full of soft realizing~ Nicely said, poetess. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
How essential it is that when we miss someone we want them to miss us also to validate our feelings...otherwise we are all alone in our mission...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
my friend, I have always loved how you just get right to the heart of the matter. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I sure hope the answer is "yes" to all these questions, it's nice to be appreciated and acknowledged, thanks for this honest piece! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vandana, Enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
vandana - yes, I'm sure that he does know. Wish you the best... BC |
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