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Victoria
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0 posted 2001-07-11 10:55 AM


The moon is a blossom tonight
blooming tenderly
golden petals drift in the breeze
blushing with romance

sweetness drifts into his window
touching softly his skin
a moonflower is shining tonight
breathing closely to him

laying softly upon his pillow
petals of golden hair
whispers upon his neck
while in a slumber, unaware

radiant upon the stem of night
is a moonflower bare

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


© Copyright 2001 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-11 11:03 AM


beautifully done... soft and romantic...

good write!!! I enjoyed

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2 posted 2001-07-11 11:06 AM


I'm a little Cpat echo!

enjoyed this a lot!

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3 posted 2001-07-11 11:17 AM


Wishing for one of those nights..Beautiful
Sandra

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4 posted 2001-07-11 12:18 PM



Wow - Victoria, I really like this!
I hope that Marge gets to read this - she will love it  

Melissa~

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5 posted 2001-07-11 12:24 PM


Your poetry makes such a soft and romantic display of the moon in comparing it to a flower in bloom.  Lovely image.
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6 posted 2001-07-11 01:22 PM



One can almost see the petals falling away and down....

a lovely visual, Victoria...

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7 posted 2001-07-11 02:00 PM


Beautiful and very nice writing!!!

Nathan

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8 posted 2001-07-11 02:01 PM


Victoria~

'The moon is a blossom tonight
blooming tenderly
golden petals drift in the breeze
blushing with romance'


I do soooooooo enjoy the poetic allure of the moon~
Just adore the idea of her 'blushing'.
Might have to add that thought to my 'moonies' !

This is great !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com               

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9 posted 2001-07-11 02:38 PM


Thank you all so very much..i love writing about the moon..it is always an inspiration when everything else fails haa...hugss

              ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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10 posted 2001-07-11 06:01 PM


lovely ~V~  very tender thoughts

huggssssss

M

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...Pope John Paul II



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11 posted 2001-07-11 06:15 PM


Such a soft, gentle, tender write!
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12 posted 2001-07-11 07:16 PM


This piece of writing was dripping with romance and I loved every word........Sue

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13 posted 2001-07-11 09:08 PM


Victoria, this is really beautiful, it moved me so much as I read the words I felt what you were trying to say!  Thank you for this.


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14 posted 2001-07-12 12:35 PM


Thank you Maureen, Sue, Eddie, and Kathleen..nice to hear from all of you..hugs

              ~Victoria~

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15 posted 2001-07-12 06:30 PM


Very nice Victoria...James
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16 posted 2001-07-12 09:00 PM


Victoria - I am touched by your writing 'Touched by a Moonflower, but also have been touched by a Moonbeam...

BC

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17 posted 2001-07-12 09:36 PM


thank you james and bill..delighted to hear from you both .. glad you peeked in

              ~Victoria~

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18 posted 2001-07-12 09:37 PM


Ooh...wonderfully sensual write, as usual, Victoria...I truly enjoyed this...great work!

sp  

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

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19 posted 2001-07-12 09:44 PM


Such fragrant ease desires breeze you please.
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20 posted 2001-07-13 07:57 AM


Thank you snowpants and RS..thank you for peeking in..always nice hearing from you both..

                    ~Victoria~

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21 posted 2001-07-14 08:17 PM



Victoria-
   WOW...this is wonderful!  
   So soft and romantic is this render..
   I love it..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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22 posted 2001-07-14 10:35 PM


thank you Vicky..nice to hear from you hugs

              ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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23 posted 2001-07-15 05:49 PM


Victoria,

So many lovely lines here. Very, very pretty.

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

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24 posted 2001-07-15 06:41 PM


So soft and sensual, and I can picture a young woman reciting this to her lover in evening's shadows of the moon.  Beautiful!

~If you have a choice to sit down or dance, I hope that you dance~

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25 posted 2001-07-15 10:02 PM


thank you whispers caress and mysteria..nice of you to peek in..

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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26 posted 2001-07-16 08:39 AM


Thank you Whisper's Caress and Mysteria, so nice of you both to peek in..glad you enjoyed.

                   ~Victoria~

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27 posted 2002-03-23 06:19 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words always shed light and magic across these pages, this sings with enchantment! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may your love forever touch you with spring! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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