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Morning Fog
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Morning Fog |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
Morning Fog Darkness came quickly, while droplets blurred my clear. As the storming subsided, I picked up scattered thoughts and laid them to rest for the remaining moments, before retiring to another dreamless night. Letting in an overwhelming feeling, a grayness colored my soul. Morning arrived, routine with something missing. I wonder why things change and who controls the happenings in life. And if one controls their own destiny, then why am I always looking through fog? ~A [This message has been edited by Alicethruglass (edited 07-11-2001).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Alicethruglass - very powerful writing of feelings and thoughts... BC |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
*sigh* I've been looking through much fog lately. Guess we'll just have to wait for the sun to rise and burn it all away. Nice Write, Jeremy |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... good imagery and flow..I ejoyed the read |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ah yes, we do so, and it is likely good that it is so, for if we knew it all front and back forward and past, how would we cope reminds me of the scripture... ( paraphrased ) now in a mirror dimly, but one day face to face |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I sense the feel of a rut, surrounding you, and the intense need to step up and out of it, which you are doing with your writing. Enjoyed! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done...i think we all feel this way sometimes...hopefully the fog will disappear soon... ~Victoria~ |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Fog shuts us down, and helps us look within...as does your poem. Nicely done. Bob |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
Bill- thank you for your response. *s Jeremy- the sun has to shine sometime in a life, thank you Cpat Hair- thank you for the kind words VAS- yes thank you for the scripture *s Lady In White- are you a mindreader? writing does help. thank you Victoria- I hope it disappears soon, too *s Bob- you are very wise...thank you *s ~Alice |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AliceThruGlass~ 'I picked up scattered thoughts and laid them to rest' And shared them with us ... This is very good. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I personally like the fog...it let's me feel like I can hide, for just a little while......  I enjoyed this very much |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Who controls the happenings in life...good question. I have no answer but I can recommend an excellant glass cleaner. I've read this several times and like it very much. |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
Marge- happy you enjoyed *w ~A~ SEA- I like the fog too, thank you JLR- ok whats the name of the glass cleaner, I can always use a new one, I have 47 windows in my home. Thank you for reading. *s ~Alice |
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