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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan 
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SAWAAL QUESTION Hum nay khabi kissi say zindhghi bher ka sawaal na kiya I have never questioned to anyone for the whole life Hum nay khabi kissi say piyar karnay ka sawaal na kiya I have never questioned to anyone for love Jub tuk milli naheen thi tum humain Until you did not meet me Hum nay khabi kissi say sath nibanay ka sawaal na kiya I have never questioned to anyone for living togather ~Wasi~ I love to nice poetry. [This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 07-11-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Until you did not meet me Hum nay khabi kissi say sath nibanay ka sawaal na kiya I have never questioned to anyone for living togather I actually wish I didn't understand these lines. Hugs to you, for your wide open heart, Wasi... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
yes, your heart is wide open like Serenity said, this is so moving. |
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helen smith Member
since 2001-03-12
Posts 240 |
i like your poetry waseem |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
moving words and emotions... nicely written... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yes very moving words "until you did not meet me" that brings pain to my heart and mist to my eyes |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Very nicely done, Waseem, and very moving..gentle smile, my friend |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Waseem~ Your tenderness moves us all. Certainly do appreciate having you here. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Thank you very much serenity, Irish, helen, Cpat, VAS, Logan, Marge ........ I am not able to have such a kind love that you people give to me.. I am really very thankful to all of you.. I LOVE YOU ............  [This message has been edited by Waseem Cheema (edited 07-12-2001).] |
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