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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-07-11 03:28 AM



Wishing  I Could

Wish I could fly
Like wings of a dove
To land there each day
Share you my love

Wish I could bring
A smile to your face
To land there each day
With open embrace

Wish I could reach
On the clouds ride
To land there each day
To sit by your side

Wish I could deliver
Bright stars above
To land there each day
Neath sparkling love

Wish I could speak
My longing desire
To land there each day
To share and inspire

Wish I could arrive
To show you I care
To land there each day
I wish I was there !

Hope

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-07-11 07:31 AM


I loved the simplicity in this!


Bill Charles
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2 posted 2001-07-11 08:29 AM


HopeS - close your eyes and dream of what could be, and it may... Very nice write, and flowed very well...

BC

WhiteDragon
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3 posted 2001-07-11 09:29 AM


I liked this very much.  Thanks for sharing    God Bless, Jeremy
VAS
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4 posted 2001-07-11 11:25 AM


those feelings are held so often by so many about those for which they care

well done, in a simplistic way, which is what caring really should be

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2001-07-11 02:06 PM


HopeS~

'Wish I could deliver
Bright stars above
To land there each day
Neath sparkling love'


I just adore the sincerity of your gentle words~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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wayoutwalt
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6 posted 2001-07-13 03:23 PM


come on yuh i like this so come on!
Victoria
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7 posted 2001-07-13 03:30 PM


Lovely Hope..soft and tender..

                 ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


vlraynes
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8 posted 2001-09-01 09:49 PM



HopeS-
   Such lovely thoughts you've penned.
   Much enjoyed.

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Alan
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9 posted 2001-09-01 11:10 PM


soft and gentle...i love the thoughts
alan

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