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doncoyate
New Member

since 2001-07-10

Posts 2

0 posted 2001-07-10 11:28 PM

His days are countless and friends are few.
All day to do nothing with no one.
He prays for sleep to set him free.
In dreams, he swims for miles and runs
like the wind
In dreams, he's his old self again...
in dreams...

Loneliness has become a friend, and every
hour awake, a foe.
Too much time to pity one's self.
He prays for sleep to set him free.
In dreams, He's the hero
who gets the girl.
In dreams, he's the fastest human
in the world.
In dreams...

HE LIVES TO DREAM--
HE DREAMS TO LIVE--

an endless cycle he must endure...
Ironically, he's found a cure

In dreams

[This message has been edited by doncoyate (edited 07-10-2001).]

WhiteDragon
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 70
O-town, Fl

1 posted 2001-07-10 11:39 PM

HEY! Looks like i get to be the one to welcome you. I liked this very much...reminds me of how i felt a little while back. Thanx for sharing, and welcome! God Bless, Jeremy

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-07-10 11:51 PM

Welcome [again?] to Passions! Perhaps a new name, but you're welcome back, just the same!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

3 posted 2001-07-11 12:04 PM

This is beautiful...welcome
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2001-07-11 01:10 AM

I like this ...welcome to our world

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-07-11 01:50 AM

I liked this

Welcome

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-07-11 02:15 AM

I really enjoyed reading this one!!! Welcome to PIP! The ending was superb...a return to the phrase "in dreams"

Well done!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2001-07-11 03:26 AM

This is a beauty...just weeps a lonely isolation. I could relate. Welcome...my friend.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2001-07-11 09:38 AM

nicely done... I enjoyed!

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

9 posted 2001-07-11 09:47 AM

HE LIVES TO DREAM--
HE DREAMS TO LIVE--

is very beautiful......Welcome to passion

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

10 posted 2001-07-11 02:21 PM

Welcome to Passions. I look forward to more of your work.

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

11 posted 2001-07-11 02:49 PM

very nice.....who of us here does not have 'dreams'.....welcome

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

12 posted 2001-07-11 04:58 PM

I wanted to thank everybody for being so kind to our friend Don...I'm sure he would like to thank you all personally, but he does not own a pc and will be posting and reading from mine from time to time! Thanks all, and I'm sure he's anxious to read your work and your replies!!!

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

13 posted 2001-07-14 06:17 PM

Don-
   WOW!  This is awesome!!
   Wonderful first post!
   Welcome to Passions!
   I look forward to reading more of your work.

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

14 posted 2001-07-14 06:51 PM

Nice poem we all have dreams and I can tell you that some of them come true.

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

15 posted 2001-07-14 07:18 PM

Where would we be without our dreams?? I know they are such an important part of my life. Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

16 posted 2001-07-14 08:31 PM

Welcome to Passions, I must warn you once you're in you can't leave! ha ha

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