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How Many Moons Have I ?
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How Many Moons Have I ? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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How Many Moons Have I ? ~*Marge Tindal*~ ~Tell me please, how many moons have I yet to phase across alluring nights of love I have peaked in the crescent knowing new love's on the rise I have basked in the knowing I am soon set to glowing with the love shining in your eyes~  And ... that's but the half of it~~ I have risen so half-full to the specter of you Shrouded in mystery of the time we spent apart Glowed in full-measure of pure pleasure sent from bright glow of heart~ How many moons have I~ ~Again, you phase in the fullest of soon-rising orb of soft alabaster glow, wanting only that you should know - you catch me in your loving light and hold me in raptured shine of the night - fully extending rays of soft glow - spilling of such thrill seeps through my heart and my soul as to keep me in mesmerize reflected in another's eyes Waiting for soft expelled sighs that lay across a diamond sky in phases full of realize the glow of love~ And then ... there you glow again~~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"as to keep me in mesmerize reflected in another's eyes Waiting for soft expelled sighs that lay across a diamond sky in phases full of realize" Ah Marge ... and "there YOU glow again" sweet lady of luna. This is a breathtaking masterpiece, simply marvelous!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Marge, very gentle smile. The moon wraps its moonbeams around you, holding you close to its heavenly draw, ahh, but then you are of the heavens in all you do and say |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge smiling big on this one...I love the way you portray the moon...there are so many meanings in this...I love it *BIG HUGS** Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
These many moons of yours are making the tides were going every which way and we couldn't tell night from day with all the BRIGHT.... so I HAD to come and tell you, you Glow, Girl! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 07-10-2001).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"~Tell me please, how many moons have I yet to phase across alluring nights of love I have peaked in the crescent knowing new love's on the rise I have basked in the knowing I am soon set to glowing with the love shining in your eyes~" Marge I love this, what magical musings from your heart to your pen.....always find such beauty in your words ~SEA [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 07-10-2001).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge - you have many, many more moons to brighten your sky.. A peach of a writing. BC |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
I loved this! Thank You, Jeremy |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Margie-girl you shine so brightly with this!  you know that I love "shape" poems you clever lil' moon-lover you! You pay tribute to Luna with eloquence~ Melissa  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
OH! what a treat this was Marge..lovely as can be..  ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ It's as though you inhale the poet's thoughts and expel the most pleasant replies~ I thank you. Logan~ You've caught me quite speechless~  Cindi~ Thank you for seeing the many phases of me. Karilea~ Well ... lookie here ! By the magic-of-mod, the moon now glows here !  SEA~ Awwww ! Thank you so much for letting me know you like what I LOVE doing ! Bill~ I thank you. I love peaches ! WhiteDragon~ I so appreciate your reply. Melissa~ Yes ... and you know that I LOVE what you all let me do with my little painting phases ! *WHAT FUN I have ! Thank you all ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ And didn't you just sneak in on a moonbeam ! Thank you, sweet lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Moonglow is you...this poem is really bright with it! Hugs! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Sister of my heart ... we share the moonglow. Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
You write about me so very well. I cannot pretend it did not phase me at all Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LunaTic~ I LOVE your reply.  Caught me in a grin for sure ! ! Such allure have you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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g-hm Member
since 2001-05-16
Posts 85 |
Your writing is amazing. Gail |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ah, Gail~ I have to give credit to some mighty adorable muses~ They LOVE making me reach for it ! Thank you so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I sit and await the third phase of the harvest moon hoping to share time alone for us |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ ~Moon in third harvest will reveal - crop of thoughts that are real Suspended in glowing of allure-to be very sure We will reap hearts ripening to fullest of knowing~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LightHouseBob~ Look at you SHINE ! That is WONDERFUL ! Thank you sooooooooo much. Warning: They can be contagious ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Marge - If I were to choose a favorite from your wonderful works, this piece would be one of the top contenders... Awesome - Simply Awesome... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Thank you ... I was at my son's when the title jumped on for the ride home~ Wasn't sure where it was going to go as it fell to the page~ But ... Oh, I had such fun with it. To know that you enjoyed it so - makes me realize that some things are just meant to be ! I appreciate your reply. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- You are truly the master of lunar linguistics... You write of the moon like no other.. This is an absolute masterpiece... a true work of art my friend..  I'm lovin' it!! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-13-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
These looked lonely so I'm sending them back to the top!  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Marge, I have really missed this place....and now I know why....you have captured such a feeling among these words.....very beautiful.... hugs to you...Lauren Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh my dear Marge, how ever could I have missed this great verse of moonshining. Must have been a bit blind or something  Like it, and all the replies too, very much. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
Marge! Do you know how much I love this? I *LOVE* it! this is fabulous! You've opened new doors of poetry for me! Wonderful wonderful wonderful! Hugs, ~Krista "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ You know how much I appreciate your opinion. I have such fun with these little 'moonies' ... what great fun to share them with you. Serenity~ Well, thanks gal ! Guess we'd call that Three-Moons-Rising ! GreenEyes~ When the moon rises, may we always see you in the glow of the friendship circle. Titia~ Thank you, lovie. Glad to have you in the shining friendship. SmittenKitten~ What a very nice thing to say. Thank you so much. *hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mishtheelf Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 68 |
It's very easy for me to ignore many of the options this forum provides for creation of an aesthetic piece. You don't seem to share that problem at all. Thanks for brightening my night with this painting and song intertwined. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, You are amazing! This is absolutely stunning I agree with all comments above You do shine a lovely light on this forum Your moon and star gazing freind, Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MishTheElf~ I confess to having absolutely no willpower. When I'm given the paintbrushes - I paint ! LizzieLove~ I thank you. This is kind of one of the pieces I most enjoyed 'painting'. Thank you bunches. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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