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The Artist and the Writer
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The Artist and the Writer |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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The artist and the writer plotted secret their escape the shores upon La Jolla set the scene of long await. Breathless anticipaion mixed with legendary fame they always kept the longing it was time to feel again. Her memories of kisses with champagne and candlelight soon waiting would be over as they loved throughout the night. With heated racing heartbeats they arrived to ocean's song a rocky sheltered haven ending separation long. Moonglow shone upon their love shooting stars spoke of their fate his arms a force of nature proving time was not too late. With dreams partially sated she returned to special room unknowing that with absence their relationship was doomed. For while she waited anxious he had gone to someone else a claim of feelings changing left her lone with heart of melt. She cried within the cottage in a state of broken shock her dream became her nightmare with her love in final dock. Still nightly, lying lonely she plays sounds of ocean waves oft times with reminiscence of a love she could not save. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
some wonderful lines in this all too often kind of story well done! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
catalinamoon - you led me to a place where I felt I would want to be, and then I wasn't sure... A most beautiful flow of words, and very well written. BC |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
So sad, yet touching. Sometimes, memories like that serve a purpose and help us see there is hope of love again. Good write, Sandra. All writing comes |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a good write, Cat... a sad song... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Still nightly, lying lonely she plays sounds of ocean waves oft times with reminiscence of a love she could not save." * I have one of those sound machines and listen to the ocean every night........ I loved this so much  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Such a sad tale you tell here...beautifully done |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
OOh, you tricked me. You made it sound like it would be happy, and then you made it sad  Oh well, i still loved it God Bless, Jeremy |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely told..some very nice lines in this.. I enjoyed!!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely done sandra..a sad one but its his loss..hugss ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
One of your best, Sandra. Very eloquently stated lines: "they arrived to ocean's song", "her dream became her nightmare with her love in final dock." Why do I relate to this poem... -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks all for reading. Its a sad story, wish it were not so darn true. Sandra |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, WOW!!! So very beautiful, so many feelings reflected. This is your best yet.... Love, Elise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'll go with Elise on that one. . . there's a lot of memories here. . . and you tell them well. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Loved the flow in this, you really had me going there what a read! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
A tale of happiness, a tale of sorrow, a tale very well done indead, gentle Sandra..very gentle smile |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
I was really touched by this...some hits home...thanks Cindi |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CatalinaMoon~ Such beauty in the sadness~ Riveting read~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sandra- Oh how this one tugs at my heart. Much sadness blanketed in such a lovely verse. Beautifully penned. Big Hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh, how beautifully sad. Her dream became her nightmare This poem really touched me. It's so painful to feel so much when it's not returned. A beautiful write as you always do Tracey If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have expressed it very well...James |
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