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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida 
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wrote this for a friend whose 21 year old nephew was killed in a drug-related thing...he had a little girl, and had gotten off drugs..but still had some friends in that "part of the world"...  =================================================== as your song finds its last note your tune lingers on my mind as it will even after the tears are lessened i will hum your tune-- loving you... though only you could fill in the words i will listen to the music you've left behind and sometimes i will close my eyes urging the tears to escape while i find my smile remembering the magic of you... dgvarner 6-1-01 so many things i want to say to him..but i just placed a rose on his grave, and talked to the wind... -tim mcgraw [This message has been edited by fallen rain (edited 07-10-2001).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a wonderful tribute to a friend, d... Sometimes there just aren't adequate reasons, ya know? |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
i stand in agreement with all Nan said well done |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
This piece fits your name very well.... I'm sure the rain did fall after your friend read this heartfelt dedication to her son. How very sad. You are a considerate and warm friend to have written such a loving poem. I'm new here as of today... Just registered and looking forward to reading some good poetry... just like this one. Love and peace ((~.~)) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
fallen rain - a tribune well done, precious it is... BC |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Seems to be a day of dedications, and this is certainly a lovely tribute to your friend's nephew, and I know his heart will be full when he receives it, well done and thank you so very much for your nice comment on my loosing my friend today (Hugs to you) If I made you smile today then I did my job! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
dg, hon, this is wonderful and sad all at once....I love this.... (and did I tell you that your baby is beyond beautiful?!)  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
 yes, it is sad but a lovely tribute. That baby is adorable! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sad but lovely.... nicely written... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Fallen rain, Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
NAN..thank you ..and what you said is very true..VAS..thank you..we can ask a million "why's", and get the big zero answers..but one day..we'll understand.. FLUTTER..thanks and glad youve joined us in the blue pages..BILL..many thanks friend poet.. MYSTERIA..wow..i didnt realize it was so recently that you lost your friend..i'm so sorry.. thank you for stopping in to read this one.. SEA..thanks sea.. i appreciate your comments..youre so faithful!  thank you for the comment on my baby! she just turned 3! thats an old pic..i'll have to get some new pics of her online.. IRISH..i thank you! and for saying my baby is adorable too  CPAT..thank you! SEYMOUR..and i thank you.. hugs, g so many things i want to say to him..but i just placed a rose on his grave, and talked to the wind... |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
dg, a sad and lovely piece. Too much lose going on here lately. Makes one think of their own mortality. Parker |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
PARKER..you sneak..  yes..it does make one start to think about mortality.. thanks for coming to see me.. hugs, g |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DG/FallenRain~ 'i will hum your tune-- loving you... though only you could fill in the words' Deeply felt piece of your heart~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks MARGIE always good to hear from you!hugs, g |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Well done g, this one reaches out! Take care! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hey there aussie EAGLE  glad it reached.. good to hear from you!hugs, g |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg/fallen- you know i love this...i've missed reading these little pieces of your heart, and this one is beautiful.. love and hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
thanks TRICKS you missed me so much you couldnt find me aye..loli know..its that identity crisis i get going through from time to time..!! teehee.. its me its me!! thanks for finding my "sad" side.. hugs, g |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
dg, it has been a long while since i read your work and i don't know how to respond to this one...i suspect i feel a little helpless for i hate to admit that life can be that fragile.... hope life's well, kaile |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
lovely |
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