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This place must be...
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This place must be... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This place must be like my kitchen... whenever I get it all cleaned up, looking almost immaculate... cuz that's as close as I get, ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ it stands there begging me to create fill each counter with enterprise fill my eyes with improvise fill the cupboards to the skies with cookies, cakes or even pies and now we have a page to rage to fully with our words engage to open up our life, its stage and from ourselves to not dissuage nor keep our thoughts locked in a cage but place them here for all to see for it seems to be the place to be |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
VAS - what a place, eh? What a place to give and receive in our writings. Love it. BC |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yes, Bill and I have guests coming for dinner and I have to clean and, and, and pull myself away from here!!!!! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
 YES YES YES Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'm picturing your kitchen here... Lovin' it...  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is great, humorous and oh so true. Sandra |
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Flutterwings Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 288Maine |
A fun read!!!!  The rhythm and rhyme is just so fluid.... enjoyed every single word. Sounds like you've had a peek in my kitchen at one time or another. Enjoyed this alot. I'm new to the list... Just registered today and I think I will like this place.... Love and peace ((~.~)) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enjoyed the last stanza...I like it when the words trickle out and down and wrap you around and drown in treackle that freckles smiles from frowns... well, you get the idea... aren't the first pages FUN! |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Beautifully put...I love the last stanza the most....this is the place to be! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
awesome Vas really yuh. I love the idea |
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