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Open Poetry #15
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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-07-10 07:04 PM

Cold air
And rain that falls,
Freezing on all
It touches,
Back dropped day
Framed in ice,
Hangs timeless
As winter hold
Its sway.

This pain
In my chest gnaws
At reason and comfort
Leaving uncertainty
To stifle each breath

The ice will melt,
And seasons will change
As all things do…
Leaving another canvas
To be mounted
Admired or
Despised

Breathe…
Each lungful a passing
Of life and time
Exhaled…to form clouds
In the cold…
That disappear
Leaving little
To mark your
Passing

But an image
Framed in
glistening
© Copyright 2001 Cpat Hair - All Rights Reserved
Bill Charles
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1 posted 2001-07-10 07:10 PM

Cpat Hair - enjoyed the read, and very nicely done.

BC
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2 posted 2001-07-10 07:11 PM

Oh I like this!  I was going to paste my favorite stanza, then I kept finding another, so just consider the entire of it a wonder to me!
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-07-10 07:12 PM

How good!  Wonderful.  BRAVO!
Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-07-10 07:31 PM

Really, really liked it.

Titia

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Irish Rose
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5 posted 2001-07-10 07:50 PM

Boy, I needed this, the a/c doesn't work in my car!  Thank you!
Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2001-07-10 08:26 PM

Excellent imagery Cpat ... much enjoyed and appreciated on this blistering hot evening, very nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
Sunshine
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7 posted 2001-07-10 09:11 PM


...an image framed in glistening...

IWIHWT....and if you tell me you penned this in the middle of summer, I stand that much more impressed...wilted, but impressed...
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with you
8 posted 2001-07-10 10:15 PM

makin me look forward to the cold of winter....
CocoBaci
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9 posted 2001-07-11 02:43 AM

I very very much enjoyed reading your poem...

*~coco~*
Paula Finn
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10 posted 2001-07-11 03:12 AM

MMMMMMM what images this brough to mind....
vlraynes
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11 posted 2001-07-14 05:55 PM


Cpat-
   thanks for the chilly imagery...
   i like this alot!  

   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes
shadow974
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12 posted 2001-07-14 06:03 PM

Nicely done, winters just around the corner. Wish I had a fire place!

Do not fear going forward slowly,
Fear only standing still.
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