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devinechild22
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0 posted 09-12-2002 10:04 PM       View Profile for devinechild22   Email devinechild22   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devinechild22


i stare at you from across the room
waiting for u to notice me
do u see me
i grasp a quick glance without your knowing
i hold it for it`s sweet few seconds
and then i break away from my quiet escape
how can i tell you?
how will i let you know?
i sit here in this bitter silence
only the sound of my heart beating fast
how can i tell you?
how can i let you know?
i want to break this silence but will it be sweet no more?
tell me your name
i know nothing about you but i fell like i`ve known you all my life
how can i tell you?
how can i let you know?
© Copyright 2002 Allison Colgrove - All Rights Reserved
LyricFetish
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1 posted 09-12-2002 10:50 PM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

Very cute poem. I like the way you repeat the lines:
"how can I tell you?
how can I let you know?"
I think we've all felt this way about someone before!

"I can taste you on my lips
and smell you in my clothes"
*BHS

 
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