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devinechild22
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since 2002-08-28
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0 posted 2002-09-12 10:04 PM



i stare at you from across the room
waiting for u to notice me
do u see me
i grasp a quick glance without your knowing
i hold it for it`s sweet few seconds
and then i break away from my quiet escape
how can i tell you?
how will i let you know?
i sit here in this bitter silence
only the sound of my heart beating fast
how can i tell you?
how can i let you know?
i want to break this silence but will it be sweet no more?
tell me your name
i know nothing about you but i fell like i`ve known you all my life
how can i tell you?
how can i let you know?

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LyricFetish
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since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
1 posted 2002-09-12 10:50 PM


Very cute poem. I like the way you repeat the lines:
"how can I tell you?
how can I let you know?"
I think we've all felt this way about someone before!

"I can taste you on my lips
and smell you in my clothes"
*BHS

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