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ShadyMakaveli
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since 2002-08-21
Posts 128


0 posted 2002-09-12 03:24 AM



Feelings getting stronger
Can't contain any longer
I need to explain
The thoughts in my brain
Entrenched with fear
Of what i might hear
Sustain my feelings, for i am dreaming
Lost in lust, can't adjust, in love there's no justice
Don't wanna face this, i hate this
With nothing to lose, it's you i choose
Wanna know your views, will u refuse
To much to handle, like a candle
Warming I melt, to much my hearts felt
As the was melts, i realize
With each passing drop i scrutinize
I understand what i must do
Be open with you, always be true
Confess my undying love for you

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LyricFetish
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528
North Carolina
1 posted 2002-09-12 11:51 PM


I really enjoyed your poem. The rhyme scheme was wonderful. Awesome.

*~Meredith~*

"I can taste you on my lips
and smell you in my clothes"
*BHS

lilmissbabyteddybear
Junior Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 17
Abilene, Texas
2 posted 2003-03-17 12:25 PM


OMG>. this is a great poem.. i liked how it rymed.. i could say it.. and understand it. all to well i might add. lol.. i like it .. ~+~+~JeNnYgOoD~+~+~

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