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Undying Love

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ShadyMakaveli
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since 08-21-2002
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0 posted 09-12-2002 03:24 AM       View Profile for ShadyMakaveli   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ShadyMakaveli


Feelings getting stronger
Can't contain any longer
I need to explain
The thoughts in my brain
Entrenched with fear
Of what i might hear
Sustain my feelings, for i am dreaming
Lost in lust, can't adjust, in love there's no justice
Don't wanna face this, i hate this
With nothing to lose, it's you i choose
Wanna know your views, will u refuse
To much to handle, like a candle
Warming I melt, to much my hearts felt
As the was melts, i realize
With each passing drop i scrutinize
I understand what i must do
Be open with you, always be true
Confess my undying love for you
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LyricFetish
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since 01-13-2000
Posts 515
North Carolina


1 posted 09-12-2002 11:51 PM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

I really enjoyed your poem. The rhyme scheme was wonderful. Awesome.

*~Meredith~*

"I can taste you on my lips
and smell you in my clothes"
*BHS

lilmissbabyteddybear
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since 03-16-2003
Posts 18
Abilene, Texas


2 posted 03-17-2003 12:25 AM       View Profile for lilmissbabyteddybear   Email lilmissbabyteddybear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lilmissbabyteddybear

OMG>. this is a great poem.. i liked how it rymed.. i could say it.. and understand it. all to well i might add. lol.. i like it .. ~+~+~JeNnYgOoD~+~+~
 
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