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See Your Love Through

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Winston Froom
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since 11-28-2001
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0 posted 09-11-2002 05:41 PM       View Profile for Winston Froom   Email Winston Froom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Winston Froom

//Excuses to my mates for this pop poem. I did try for it to be a Gallagherian type of pop though :}

See Your Love Through

Leave your fashion of reason
there's no need for much ado.
Though I'm not for all seasons-
Tonight, you need to see your love through.

Cast away your stale manner
don't you know your time is due?
It's much too late to read the banner-
Tonight, you need to see your love through.

Hold your body laws of motion
the opposing conditions I withdrew.
Even if you still don't have a notion-
Tonight, you need to see your love through.
© Copyright 2002 Winston Froom - All Rights Reserved
LyricFetish
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since 01-13-2000
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1 posted 09-12-2002 11:37 PM       View Profile for LyricFetish   Email LyricFetish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LyricFetish

Truly a great poem. I liked the phrase "stale manner". I commend you.

*~Meredith~*

"I can taste you on my lips
and smell you in my clothes"
*BHS

 
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